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NightShadow
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since 2001-09-04
Posts 127
New Jersey

0 posted 2001-09-21 09:51 AM


As I sit here,
I wonder why I do, the things I do..
Do I have a reason, for talking to all of you?
or is it just my heart aches for someone to listen..
Im so unsure but you are my friends..

As I sit here,
I wonder why things happen, the way they sometimes do..
Is it to upset us, or make us angry?
or trying to get us to be stronger..
I am so unsure, but you are my friends..

As I sit here,
I wonder why, Im actually writing this poem..
To get those of u to listen?
or am I trying to cheer someone up..
I am so unsure, but you are my friends..

As I sit here,
I wonder why, you sometimes make me cry..
ButI come to find out..
Whenever im in doubt..
You all are my friends, that always will care..


A Life without Love, is no life at all...

[This message has been edited by NightShadow (edited 09-21-2001).]

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Alan
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since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499
right next door
1 posted 2001-09-21 10:04 AM


You have asked many of the same questions I have. Great read.
alan

rwood
Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793
Tennessee
2 posted 2001-09-21 06:32 PM


Thank you for sharing with us your thoughts. We all have a voice. It's so nice to be listened to....and so nice to sit back and listen sometimes. Peace.

Sincerely,
Regina

[This message has been edited by rwood (edited 09-21-2001).]

Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182
Netherlands
3 posted 2001-09-21 06:44 PM



I am your friend
in just the way you meant
And why you do the things you do
is just NightShadow, because you are you

Titia



A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
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RSEvans
Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147
Tulsa, OK, USA
4 posted 2001-09-22 08:30 AM


There are many here who would be lucky to be called friend by you, as I count myself more than lucky.
NightShadow
Member
since 2001-09-04
Posts 127
New Jersey
5 posted 2001-09-22 12:56 PM


Thank you all.. Im glad you enjoyed it.

A Life without Love, is no life at all...

paladin
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since 2001-08-05
Posts 930
Pensacola,Fl.
6 posted 2001-09-24 10:24 AM


A friend is a person who knows every thing about you but likes you any way.To have a friend you must be a friend.

paladin

NightShadow
Member
since 2001-09-04
Posts 127
New Jersey
7 posted 2001-09-24 10:25 AM


Very True, Very True... thanks paladin

A Life without Love, is no life at all...

DreamRomancer
Junior Member
since 2001-09-18
Posts 46
Ohio, United States
8 posted 2001-09-24 11:04 AM


NightShadow, friends are forged and never made
Only a friend will remain no matter how bad or good things become.
They remain by your side and support you always, no matter what personal pain may hide.
A Forged friend am I until the end.
Great pen!

With my pen I shall create,
With my mind I shall explore,
With my strength I shall endure,
With my poetry I shall have legacy.

The Rusty Knight
Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414
Texas
9 posted 2001-09-24 11:26 AM


As I sit here,
I wonder why I do, the things I do..
Do I have a reason, for talking to all of you?
or is it just my heart aches for someone to listen..
Im so unsure but you are my friends..


I think we all ask these questions to ourself at times....The answers do not come easy and different every time we ask...I like this poem...it can be as dark and thoughtful as our mood or light and cheery.

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
10 posted 2001-09-24 11:47 AM


I agree with Dan.  This is a very  thought provoking write.  I have asked myself these same questions many times....and it is so nice to know that we all have so many friends here at Passions.  Good read.

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

NightShadow
Member
since 2001-09-04
Posts 127
New Jersey
11 posted 2001-09-24 12:20 PM


Thank you both, very very much! *smiles*

A Life without Love, is no life at all...

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