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Daniel J D
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0 posted 2001-09-21 03:48 AM


A Father Was Hurting

Early morning discovery, a father has expired
Taken his pain and sadness, his dreams closed
A child and grand child call out in vain
The smiles, the hugs will not return
For he has chosen to end it all
He spoke, he hurt, he did call
The night creeps in, ending the last day
Of a father that was hurting in disarray
Good bye my friend, good bye

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

© Copyright 2001 Daniel J D Ringuet - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-09-21 04:14 AM


JD~
Very, very poignantly sad~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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rwood
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2 posted 2001-09-21 08:15 AM


A message...through my overwhelming tears...will always be written in my heart...as "I love you" should be the last most important words anyone should speak in parting. But I hope they can feel the words coming back to them enough to never part entirely.

Sincerely,
Regina

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Canada eh.
3 posted 2001-09-21 03:32 PM


Hugs to you JD.

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

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