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Open Poetry #16

Watch Tomorrow

Daniel J D
Senior Member

since 2000-10-01

Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

0 posted 2001-09-21 12:44 PM

Watch Tomorrow

Wake to the misty morning
Welcome the midday sun rising
Wish the moonlight keep shining
Watch tomorrow go passing
Wonder what you are achieving

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2001-09-21 03:11 AM

JD~
Quite nicely done~
Like the format you worked it into~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

2 posted 2001-09-23 04:49 PM

Daniel-
   Enjoyed these thoughts, my friend.
   Very nicely done.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Munda
Member Elite

since 1999-10-08

Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

3 posted 2001-09-23 05:40 PM

I really like this. It left me pondering...

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2001-09-23 07:32 PM

I love poems that leave me thinking...
and this one did just that.
Thank you...good write. Nancy.

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

Voiceless
Senior Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 686
Under the stars upon the wind

5 posted 2001-09-23 09:44 PM

Short
Sweet
Start me thinking.
Surely can't ask for more!
Stupendous!!

Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial)

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