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Trillium
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0 posted 2001-09-20 11:57 PM






Children of Our World

There's a little boy in Yonkers
And a little girl in Queens.
They see that we are grieving
And they know just what it means.
There are other children scattered,
In our nation and abroad,
And some of them are kneeling,
To send tearful prayers to God.
For some have lost a parent,
Or a brother; sister dear.
An auntie or an uncle,
Though it isn't very clear,
Just how so many people
On a fine September day,
Could say good-bye and leave them
And then disappear that way.

When grown-ups are fighting
To re-gain some normalcy,
How hard it is for children,
So bereft by what they see.
They know their lives are changing
And they struggle with the pain
Of slowly realizing
They won't see their folks again.
Now we may call them heroes
And it makes us very sad,
But in the realm of children,
They were just called Mom or Dad!
Our future lies within their hands.
I hope someday they'll see,
We did the very best we could
To keep our country free!


Betty Lou Hebert





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1 posted 2001-09-21 12:17 PM


But in the realm of children,
They were just called Mom or Dad!

Boy, how true is that!!!!!

You say so much in this poem, Betty...and you say it well.  

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2 posted 2001-09-21 12:22 PM


It is all so sad. Yet we still have so much to be thankful for. My heart goes out to the children.
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3 posted 2001-09-21 12:26 PM


Oh, BettyLou~
This is sooooooo tender and touching~
Thank you for sharing it with us.

I watched the Oprah Winfrey show this afternoon~
Each family story brought a new rush of tears.
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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Daniel J D
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4 posted 2001-09-21 12:47 PM


Yeah so very true!

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

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5 posted 2001-09-21 08:10 AM


Through the eyes of a child we are humbled and most beautiful the same. Thank you for seeing and sharing! I will not forget this verse. Prayers and Peace.

Sincerely,
Regina

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6 posted 2001-09-21 06:44 PM


Your words are touching me...James
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7 posted 2001-09-21 07:50 PM


Trillium,
An excellent write. Enjoyed

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8 posted 2001-09-22 12:20 PM


Balladeer:  Thank you kind sir!

Betty Lou Hebert

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9 posted 2001-09-22 12:21 PM


Songbird:  Yes, the children who have lost people they love have also lost their childhood I'm afraid.

Betty Lou Hebert

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10 posted 2001-09-22 12:23 PM


Marge:  Thank you so much!  I know what you mean. I haven't been able to stop crying either, though not as often.  There are so many heart-wrenching stories emerging.

Betty Lou Hebert

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11 posted 2001-09-22 12:25 PM


Daniel:  Thanks for reading and appreciate your comments.

Betty Lou Hebert

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12 posted 2001-09-22 12:27 PM


Regina:  Thanks for commenting on my poem. It's such a difficult time for the children
involved.

Betty Lou Hebert

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13 posted 2001-09-22 12:29 PM


James and Seymour:  Thank you both for your nice comments.  I appreciate your reading my poem.

Betty Lou Hebert

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