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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-09-20 11:44 PM



I Shall Write

I shall write you
on the pages of my heart
onion skinned parchment layered
on the weakest part
what flows from my pen
will be the darkest of ink
so from page to page
they all shall link
a collage of a heart
the hurt and the healed
glued in seams torn
now to be sealed
letters become words
within the compose
as I write
something permanent flows

"...the rest is silence" (Hamlet)  Shakespeare

© Copyright 2001 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2001-09-21 03:28 AM


OneSlickLady~
And so you shall .....
This is quite lovely~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Sunshine
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2 posted 2001-09-21 07:52 AM



Of course you shall...

Zinsser
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3 posted 2001-09-21 09:15 AM


This is a nice piece...
~Connie~

Chelsea~
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4 posted 2001-09-21 10:33 AM


1slick_lady

excellent flow
and message,
I really enjoyed
this

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2001-09-21 11:05 AM


1slick_Lady,
A good piece of writting. Enjoyed

MyEnchanted_Melody
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across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
6 posted 2001-09-21 11:14 AM




A very well done eloquent and lovely piece..

Yes.....dear lady...write on

Thank you
**********************

Topheth
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7 posted 2001-09-21 04:54 PM


One slick poem, 1slick_lady, and one slick picture too.  
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
8 posted 2001-09-21 07:18 PM


Beautifully done....enjoyed!!

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

Honeybee
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9 posted 2001-09-21 08:42 PM



Gosh, Helen, can you hear me *sigh*?  I love this, it's so vulnerably honest and beautiful!  Into my library this goes~

I repeat: PUBLISH YOUR POEMS!  

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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