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Tennessee Angel
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0 posted 2001-09-20 11:33 PM


From this day on
I will never be the same.
Though I go from day to day,
I am forever changed.

To say good-bye,
just seems so pointless now.
After all, it's not as if
you could hear me anyhow.

One by one,
I'm taking your pictures down.
It's hard enough to heal
without your memory all around.

I know some day
I'll be able to hear that song
and remember how we danced.
Maybe I'll sing along.

But, as for now,
I'm packing that disc away.
I promise to not forget.
I will play it again some day.

This box is getting heavy
with all the memories.
There's your coffee mug, baseball cap
and your favorite wore out jeans.

Everything is packed away
that might make me think of you,
except the bed that we shared
and this heart that's broke in two.

I guess it was pretty silly of me
to think this would really work.
For all the things I've packed away
I could not pack the hurt.

So, first thing tomorrow morning,
I'll unpack everything, my dear.
And, day to day, I'll learn to live
with all your memories here.



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1 posted 2001-09-21 12:12 PM


Angel, this is a beautiful and heart-touching piece of poetry...wonderful.
Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2001-09-21 04:18 AM


TennesseeAngel~
So good to see you ... sad this is~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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rwood
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since 2000-02-29
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Tennessee
3 posted 2001-09-21 07:46 AM


Hugs to you and your decision. A very trying task of renewal...and a most wonderful step and verse. Glad to see someone close to home. Tennessee!

Sincerely,
Regina

BloomingRose
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4 posted 2001-09-21 07:56 AM


One day at a time, step by step the healing comes.
God bless.

Hugs,
Deb

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2001-09-21 06:41 PM


Yes it is a process and the strength to face whatever feelings come helps us to get through the hard times.
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
6 posted 2001-09-21 07:47 PM


Tennessee,
That is the first sign of healing. Enjoyed

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
7 posted 2001-09-21 07:51 PM


For all the things I've packed away
I could not pack the hurt.

This is very painful yet well written.
Thanks for sharing!  

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

Sven
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8 posted 2001-09-21 10:20 PM


welcome back my friend. . . some days, this is all that we can do. . .

from your heart. . .

-------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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