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vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...

0 posted 2001-09-20 11:08 PM



~Armour Of Love~

Arise
America
One nation...under God
Together we stand...united
Undaunted by hatred's merciless sword
Shielded by the armour of love
Peace be our common song
One voice, one heart
Arise

~vlraynes

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

© Copyright 2001 Vicky L. Raynes - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-09-20 11:37 PM


Ah, Vicky, my little Arizona amour-maker...I wish it were that simple. Let's hope!  
Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2001-09-21 03:15 AM


Vicky~
You do this form sooooooooo elegantly~
Wonderful thoughts in this piece~
Nobody said it would be easy ...
but undaunted we are~
Love ya'
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                                   noles1@totcon.com            

BloomingRose
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3 posted 2001-09-21 12:47 PM


You've got that good American spirit that makes us the great nation we are today.
Thanks for such an uplifting poem!

Hugs,
Deb

Kit McCallum
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4 posted 2001-09-21 03:04 PM


Wonderfully written Vicky, powerfully penned!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Honeybee
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5 posted 2001-09-21 08:25 PM



Amen! A perfect rictameter, well expressed, Vicky!

Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2001-09-22 05:13 AM


Like your hope and determination...James
dgvarner
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7 posted 2001-09-22 03:11 PM


one voice...one heart...

  i'm there...  

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"all you need is someone you can hold..dont be sad, youre not alone..i will be here for you..."  mwsmith

RSEvans
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8 posted 2001-09-22 03:21 PM


It could be that simple
Sunshine
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9 posted 2001-09-22 03:59 PM



I never knew seriousness could be so beautifully wrought...well done, our Vicky

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 09-22-2001).]

SmittenKitten
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10 posted 2001-09-22 04:26 PM



VickyChicky~ I do so love when you do rictameter.  I would agree that America's people are undaunted...it is an amazing thing to see.

Hugs to you,
~Krista

"Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you.
And all you can do is to go where they can find you."
~Winnie the Pooh

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Canada eh.
11 posted 2001-09-22 04:31 PM


I LOVE THIS!!

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

EagleOne
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12 posted 2001-09-22 08:41 PM


Well said!

"Let me pierce the realm of glamour
So I know just what I am." ~ Van Morrison


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Gaia
13 posted 2001-09-22 08:56 PM


Exactly. A Love Shield....the only shield that really protects.
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14 posted 2001-09-23 10:22 AM


Loving this, Vic.
Sandra

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