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walker
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since 2001-02-11
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0 posted 2001-09-20 04:57 PM



I took a feeling
from my heart
unwrapped it
analized it
and found out
that I could not
live without you
even if I tried.

© Copyright 2001 walker - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2001-09-20 05:10 PM


OH!! I love this..I love this..I REALLY do! Thank you Walker.

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

Topheth
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2 posted 2001-09-20 05:21 PM


Enjoyed very much - short and succulent.
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3 posted 2001-09-20 05:57 PM


Walker~
Very nicely sentimental~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Duncan
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4 posted 2001-09-20 07:30 PM


Works for me.  Very cool write, walker.
Chelsea~
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Ontario, CANADA
5 posted 2001-09-20 08:53 PM


walker

I feel the same way
about my boyfriend
now!  I really
enjoyed this

rwood
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Tennessee
6 posted 2001-09-21 06:37 AM


A great, easily understandable write of tokens of our affections. Very well done!

Sincerely,
Regina

MyEnchanted_Melody
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across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
7 posted 2001-09-21 11:33 AM




Short and wonderfully done....

I loved it...

Thank you
******************

A Whisper's Caress
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since 2000-11-03
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on the horizon of a fairytale
8 posted 2001-09-21 11:51 AM


absolutely lovely piece.....

May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat...

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
9 posted 2001-09-21 12:24 PM


Walker,
Well done, enjoyed

The Rusty Knight
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Texas
10 posted 2001-09-21 01:53 PM


This would melt any womans heart

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

Domzi
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since 2001-09-08
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New York (BK)
11 posted 2001-09-22 09:14 AM


Wondefully written...I loved it!

As my borough has always stated- Do or Die.

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