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Moody Blues
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Moody Blues |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Moody Blues A rainy day has covered me, sulking in my moody blues. Withdrawing from my rainbow views alone and silent, comforts be. Eyes of hazel, drowned in thee. I wish I may, sometimes I might How could it be, why not tonight... Just thoughts escaping silent hold to question, query uncontrolled. Watching clouds float way up high, suspended mysts have filled with gloom. Renaissanced in new costume, as droplets flow from gray of sky and trickle falls, from eye of I. I wonder how, and often when Why can't it be, like then again... Just pictures painted in my mind imaged answers, fictioned find. Pretending reigns on vintaged frame of mind and heart in spirits loss. Words today on face emboss in mirrored glass as eyes take aim and wage their war 'gainst gray of same. As if perhaps, or maybe could a turnaround of time, withstood... Just you and I, in rainbow bliss an iridescent, reminisce. ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 09-20-2001).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Wynter, A lovely say and tell him if he don't show I just may. *L* |
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Apachecat906 Member
since 2001-09-04
Posts 217Michigan, USA |
This poem is beautiful, melencholy (sp?). I'm no poet and I know it reading this, but Out of your grey sky Ive found inspirtation to search for lovely words such as these. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Sy..you read me very well *s Apachecat906 Melancholy, yes..it's finally raining here..both in moisture and words of inspiration. If you gained anything from my poem then I have accomplished my goal.*s And a dictionary/thesaurus always helps to improve upon my writing. thank you ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Masked Intruder
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Senior Member
since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets |
Lovely read, Wynter. The title caught my eye; I wrote a poem with the same not very very long ago. I may repost it. You can't wake a person who is pretending to be asleep. -- Navajo Proverb |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"I wonder how, and often when Why can't it be, like then again..." I love this part the flow of this is fantastic! I really like this one  |
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Topheth Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 297Texas |
"as droplets flow from gray of sky and trickle falls, from eye of I." All-over great, Wynter. Love the above. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Masked Intruder ..I probably could have picked a different title that may have been more appropriate for this poem but I was in a blue mood when I wrote it..I hope to read yours by the same title *s thank you. SEA ..you know sometimes the words slip right off the tongue..I mean fingers *s thank you Topheth ... "as droplets flow from gray of sky and trickle falls, from eye of I."you picked a favorite line of mine *s thank you ~Wynter [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 09-21-2001).] |
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