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vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2001-09-20 11:23 AM

So many nights,
The rainy nights,
Wash away our tears,
Bring the joy again,
(After)the night has fallen,
The whispers of a rain
has been calling,
Into nights,
Where the light has found
It's way,
(After)fallen rain,
Leaving all the songs
we hear It behind,
(after)so many days,
The rain has been falling,
Whispers of a rain calling,
Reflection of It's own light,
So many night,
The fallen rain,
The fallen stars,
Tonight,
Painting a picture
In a sky,
With so many reasons why,
(After) rain has fallen,
Rainbow In a sky,
Findind a way
to a heart,
Findind It's heart,
So many days
(after)the rain has fallen,
Finding a way
To It's day,
to shine a light away,
Morning,
Daylight,
So many nights,
With a fallen rain,
The song I listen,
Like a raindrops
On my fingertips,
(after)fallen rain....

[This message has been edited by vandana (edited 09-20-2001).]

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-09-20 11:39 AM

Vandana~ this is beautiful

one of my favorites from you

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2001-09-20 11:44 AM

VanDana~
Just look at you dancing around with your words~
Wonderful !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2001-09-20 12:37 PM

this is a song..yes? sings like one *s

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2001-09-20 12:48 PM

Vandana,
So what is left to say? Enjoyed

Apachecat906
Member

since 2001-09-04

Posts 217
Michigan, USA

5 posted 2001-09-20 12:58 PM

I also enjoyed this one. It has a falling feeling, soft and easy.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2001-09-20 03:10 PM

Read as soft as a gently falling rain...enjoyed!!

~Time has cast a spell on you
so you won't ever forget me~

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

7 posted 2001-09-20 04:33 PM

It's raining here today and the sound of it played perfectly with your words.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2001-09-20 04:37 PM

Enjoyed vandana...James

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

9 posted 2001-09-20 09:49 PM

you get better with every word my friend. . .

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rwood
Member Elite

since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

10 posted 2001-09-21 07:09 AM

A beautiful trickle of thought! Soft and comforting. Thank you for sharing!

Sincerely,
Regina

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