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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2001-09-20 11:14 AM



And Yet ...

~*Marge Tindal*~

You did not see the tears fall
You did not know I cried
For all the tears I've shed
were hidden deep inside

A heart in sorrow often wears
a smile for others to see
And yet ...
when mine broke you came on in
and shared so tenderly

All I thought I had kept hidden
could be seen by a friend so true
Thank you, special person
for everything you do~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                                   noles1@totcon.com            

© Copyright 2001 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-09-20 11:18 AM


This special person is lucky to have you Marge.  Beautiful write, tender and sincere.
Hugs.
Donna

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

SEA
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with you
2 posted 2001-09-20 11:35 AM


this should go directly to Hallmark

Marge, you are magic  

The Rusty Knight
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3 posted 2001-09-20 11:41 AM


I always thought Fla was the sunshine state because of the weather....but it is because of all of your poems coming out of there.  great piece

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

Martie
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4 posted 2001-09-20 12:48 PM


I agree, Marge...this would make a beautiful card!  Hugs dear friend!
nakdthoughts
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5 posted 2001-09-20 01:04 PM


very nice...Ms Angel of Passion *s

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



vandana
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6 posted 2001-09-20 02:23 PM


nice write
Enchantress
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7 posted 2001-09-20 02:42 PM


Very Special...Very Beautiful...the poem and YOU Marge!

~Time has cast a spell on you
  so you won't ever forget me~

TeChNo KiTtY
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8 posted 2001-09-20 02:52 PM


aww...that's really sweet  
kitkat
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9 posted 2001-09-20 04:34 PM


As always your poetry touches my heart. *I agree this is a Hallmark card

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You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face
and show the world all the love in your heart
Then people are gonna treat

Dee
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10 posted 2001-09-20 05:07 PM


Marge, someone is very lucky to have a friend like you. Beautiful.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life.     a brand

Marge Tindal
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11 posted 2001-09-20 05:31 PM


GentleSpirit~
Ah ... I'm the lucky one~

SEA~
Awwwww, thank you honey~

Dan~
Another awwwwww, thank you~

Martie~
My friend ... you are priceless~

Wynter~
*smile* ... thank you~

VanDana~
*Hugs*

Enchantress~
I thank you oodles !

TeChNo KiTtY~
Thanks bunches~

KitKat~
Awww, thank you very much.

Dee~
Shucks, that what she says~
Thank you~

*But ... if it was Hallmark you'd have to PAY for it ...
Everybody say, THANK YOU, RON !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                                   noles1@totcon.com            

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12 posted 2001-09-20 05:47 PM


ahhh Marge, I am so glad that you had a very special friend to lean on, as sometimes we  lean on you, me included, and forget that perhaps you need someone too.  Hugs sweet friend, may your heart heal in time.  Beautiful "card", simply beautiful.

~* If you want a rainbow, sometimes you just have to put up with a little rain *~

Titia Geertman
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13 posted 2001-09-20 08:11 PM


As always, just beautiful

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
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vlraynes
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14 posted 2001-09-20 11:44 PM



Marge-
   A true friend knows your heart.
   To be allowed into YOUR heart is the
   greatest gift that anyone could ask for.
   This is truly beautiful, sweet friend...as are YOU.
   I love you!
   HUGS,
   ~Me


"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Marge Tindal
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15 posted 2001-09-21 03:08 AM


Mysteria~
I feel so blessed with a wonderful network of friends.
Thank you so much.

Titia~
Big hugs for you hon.
Thank you~

Vicky~
What can I say ?
What was that song we were singing the other night ???  LOL !  
You're a doll ... and if I didn't know better,
I'd swear I see you in my mirror ~
Love ya'
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                                   noles1@totcon.com            

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