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Dark Side Of The Moon |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Dark Side Of The Moon ~*Marge Tindal*~ ~Light seems shrouded the bleakest on the dark side of the moon Causing me to wonder if the other side could be brighter than what one would assume - For though the light I view seems the brightest indeed to me I can't help but wonder if there is a shimmering for the eyes that stand in awesome view on the dark side of the same moon-that glows as evident in their eyes as my side to me~ ~*~ My deepest thanks to Logan for the inspiration of this little piece of thought on a dark night~ ~*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Ya know Marge, I tend to think the light is always there.  Well done!"Let me pierce the realm of glamour |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
WOW!!! Beautifully penned Margie you have such a way with words and format ~HUGS~ TracieLove is the life of the soul... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I can't help but wonder if there is a shimmering for the eyes that stand in awesome view on the dark side of the same moon-that glows as evident in their eyes as my side to me~ ============================== Ive said it before... when you are Luna inspired your pen is on fire. very very cool poem Margie... add my thanks to Logan hes always quietly here isnt he  Well tomorrow holds only mystery |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Luna shines her inspiration down on you in the softest of moon beams dear Marge. Beautiful penning. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, You are an endless spring. *L* |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
1derful and wonderfully creative |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--For every light, a dark..for how else would be measure and learn to understand differences. Hugs to you and Logan. |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Marge: A very impressive poem! Beautifully presented, as usual! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
You have outdone yourself here, Marge.....and that ain't easy!!!!  |
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Topheth Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 297Texas |
WOW... awesome! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
EagleOne~ I'd like to think so too, my friend.  *HUGS* Tracie~ *Hugs* right back at ya' gal~ Thanks so much. JanetMarie~ Me lika the moon thoughts too ! Yep ... that Logan is very quiet~  GentleSpirit~ Thank you so much. Seymour~ Still sproinging along ! *HUGS*  InterLoper~ Glad to see you. Thanks bunches. MartieSis~ I like to think for any dark ... there is a light~ Ya' think ? *Love n' hugs* BettyLou~ Thank you very much, my friend~  Balladeer~ I always smile to see you on my posts~ This lady sends *Hugs* along with thanks. Topheth~ Thanks. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
From one's inspiration to a poet's pen...that is indeed a gift...well done our Marge... |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
Marge, Leave it to you to fine light where there is darkness. A *S* as I go to my corner and "wonder if there is a shimmering"..Dan Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream. |
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Chelsea~ Member
since 2001-02-09
Posts 260Ontario, CANADA |
marge, this is so clever and lovely |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Oh......beautiful and such a lovely lunar format... Thank you ******************* |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"I can't help but wonder if there is a shimmering for the eyes that stand in awesome view on the dark side of the same moon" There is much depth to ponder in this piece Marge ... I've often wondered too, if the light is as bright and clear from someone else's vantage as it seems to me. Much enjoyed your thoughts in this my friend. Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ Good to see you back, hon~ Thank you~ Dan~ Sometimes I have to look awfully hard ... but thankfully I can usually find it~ Thank you~ Chelsea~ Thank you so much. MyEnchantedMelody~ I'm pleased to be able to share my thoughts. Thank you~ Kit~ And I know that we both hope that it is there for them~ Thank you, sweet lady~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- No matter how dark the night, the moons of Marge always shine brightly, and give us hope. This is beautiful, my friend. LOVE YOU~ Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ You find such joy in the little things of life~ Thank you for being such a sweet YOU~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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