So In Love With You...............

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SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

0 posted 2001-09-20 02:16 AM

In these quiet moments
before the morning dew
I reflect upon my heart
so in love with you

Unable to find the words
perfect enough to speak
the power of just your eyes
to make my knees get weak

You do something to me
like no one has before
I am in a constant state
of always wanting more

Oh this love for you consumes me
in morning’s soft new glow
and as I begin another day
I pray somehow you'll know

With every step ~ with every breath
in all I say and do
hopelessly and most complete
I’m so in love with you

~SEA~

The Rusty Knight
Member

since 2001-08-29

Posts 414
Texas

1 posted 2001-09-20 03:10 AM

WOW Sea,

You have painted a picture of how we want to be loved.

With every step ~ with every breath
in all I say and do
hopelessly and most complete
I’m so in love with you

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

[This message has been edited by The Rusty Knight (edited 09-20-2001).]

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

2 posted 2001-09-20 03:14 AM

Oh this love for you consumes me
in morning’s soft new glow
and as I begin another day
I pray somehow you'll know

SEA---Your words give me hope and strength that I may also communicate such love.

EagleOne
Member Elite

since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

3 posted 2001-09-20 04:07 AM

Perfect!

"Let me pierce the realm of glamour
So I know just what I am." ~ Van Morrison

Dee
Member Elite

since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

4 posted 2001-09-20 05:36 AM

Sea, to be totally honest.....I am jealous that you wrote something that beautiful

(I wanna write like that!)
Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand

Topheth
Member

since 2001-09-08

Posts 297
Texas

5 posted 2001-09-20 07:13 AM

How wonderful, SEA. Love it.

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

6 posted 2001-09-20 08:33 AM

You do something to me
like no one has before
I am in a constant state
of always wanting more

Oh this love for you consumes me
in morning’s soft new glow
and as I begin another day
I pray somehow you'll know
================================

lol at Dee's sweet reply.....
ya know Sea-girlie...youre just gushing contentment here..
and its a beautiful thing...
so is this poem

We love ya in love

Well tomorrow holds only mystery
And who's to say what might be
But in you I found a love so strong
The sun and the moon looked on in jealousy

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

7 posted 2001-09-20 08:36 AM

Sea,
The poem is beautiful, just show it to him.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

8 posted 2001-09-20 10:53 AM

liked it a lot

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

9 posted 2001-09-20 11:00 AM

You've got it bad, gal

I think it may be incurable

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

10 posted 2001-09-20 11:11 AM

TRK~ that is sweet thank you

Duncan~ I'm happy you liked this

thank you

EagleOne~ goodness, thank you

Dee~ LOL you write awesome, thank you for that

Topheth~ thank you

Jm~

you are so nice, thank you

Seymour~ thank you, I will

Vandana~ thank you

Interloper~

happy to see you around today, thank you

~SEA

Apachecat906
Member

since 2001-09-04

Posts 217
Michigan, USA

11 posted 2001-09-20 11:48 AM

Hmmm I think I'll send him this one too. It's so sweet that it might make him reconsider.

Anyway, good job

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

12 posted 2001-09-20 11:59 AM

This has a bubbly flow to it, and of course, it's beautifully sweet!

You know that I adore romantic poems, so of course, it's going into my library~

Well done!

Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

13 posted 2001-09-20 02:18 PM

LOVE IT !!

~Time has cast a spell on you
so you won't ever forget me~

TeChNo KiTtY
Junior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 22
Wisconsin, USA

14 posted 2001-09-20 02:28 PM

Simply beautiful

Domzi
Member

since 2001-09-08

Posts 288
New York (BK)

15 posted 2001-09-20 09:30 PM

Sounds like my feelings everytime I think of my boyfriend. I loved this poem.

Chelsea~
Member

since 2001-02-09

Posts 260
Ontario, CANADA

16 posted 2001-09-20 09:35 PM

SEA

This is so tenderly
beautiful
I love your style.

doreen peri
Member Elite

since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

17 posted 2001-09-20 09:41 PM

awwwwww

it's wonderful to see love surface on these pages in these trying times...

love, after all, is what we will need to share with each other....

and as some of the greatest lyricists/philosophers/lovers said....

"all you need is love... love is all you need"

let's pray our planet understands and adheres to those lyrics

again, good to see a love poem here

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