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SEA
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with you

0 posted 2001-09-19 09:13 PM



missing you
remembering
the gentleness
of your touch
the quiet storm
that is your voice
feeling helpless tonight
given
no choice
but this
remembering
knowing in my heart
of secret heart's
I'll never look at him
the way
I will always
look at you
when I dream...........


~SEA~


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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2001-09-19 09:27 PM


I'll never look at him
the way
I will always
look at you
when I dream...........

Oh Sea...this is so beautiful...sad, but beautiful.

~Time has cast a spell on you
  so you won't ever forget me~

Alan
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2 posted 2001-09-19 09:52 PM


SEA...this is beautiful. Sometimes a dream is better than reality.
alan

Topheth
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3 posted 2001-09-19 11:18 PM


Very nice, SEA, very nice.
Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2001-09-19 11:49 PM


SEA~
You write the dreams well, girlie~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                                   noles1@totcon.com            

EagleOne
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Between a laugh and a tear...
5 posted 2001-09-20 04:02 AM


This is absolutely beautiful!  

"Let me pierce the realm of glamour
So I know just what I am." ~ Van Morrison


JamesMichael
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6 posted 2001-09-20 09:29 AM


Nice...James
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7 posted 2001-09-20 10:18 AM


Oh darn girl....you have penned some feelings I am having oh so well today.
Beautiful write.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

SEA
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8 posted 2001-09-20 10:34 AM


Enchantress~ thank you!  

Alan~ sometimes.... thank you  

Topheth~ thanks  

Marge~ I just wish I could do it like you do!   thank you dear lady  

EagleOne~   thank you

James~  

Gentle Spirit~ I'm happy you liked this  

~SEA

"It's true/the way I feel
was promised by your face
the sound of your voice
painted on my memories
even if you're not with me
I'm with you"
~LP~

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9 posted 2001-09-20 10:50 AM


liked it a lot
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Deep in the heart
10 posted 2001-09-20 10:59 AM


Hmmmmmmmm, looove your dreams
The Rusty Knight
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11 posted 2001-09-20 11:15 AM


knowing in my heart
of secret heart's
I'll never look at him
the way
I will always
look at you
when I dream...........

Talk about steal a fellas heart....this does it....I am glad I put my mirror down from practicing my "thoughtful pout" to see this one.

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

SEA
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12 posted 2001-09-20 11:18 AM


Vandana~ thanks!  

Interloper~ you spoil me   thank you  

TRK~ lol, thank you for that incredible warm fuzzy   and I bet your "thoughtful pout" is great.....


~SEA

Apachecat906
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13 posted 2001-09-20 11:54 AM


Darn it can you stop writing all these lovey dovey poems!?!?!?  Now I have to send my ex this one and he's really gonna be mad.
oh well he doesn't like me anyway.  

Thanks for the good poem.    

SEA
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14 posted 2001-09-20 11:58 AM


LOL   sorry   glad you liked it anyway  
vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...
15 posted 2001-09-20 11:10 PM



SEA-
   Ah yes...dreams...gotta love 'em..
   Nicely penned, my friend.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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16 posted 2001-09-20 11:16 PM


Aw, SEA! I feel the same way about you...
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