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walker
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0 posted 2001-09-19 07:42 PM



I hid like a child
from the eyes of evil
It caught me off guard
Ripping my innocence
then I claimed God
Indescribable
inconceivable
Now I can't deny
evil lurks
in masks.

[This message has been edited by walker (edited 09-19-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 walker - All Rights Reserved
Sven
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1 posted 2001-09-19 07:50 PM


indeed. . . let us remove them. . .

well done my friend. . .

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Enchantress
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2 posted 2001-09-19 09:33 PM


Very well done!

~Time has cast a spell on you
  so you won't ever forget me~

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3 posted 2001-09-20 12:33 PM


Now, now...not all masks are that bad.  Though I get your point.  Good write.
Duncan
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4 posted 2001-09-20 12:37 PM


I hid like a child

The vulnerability I felt during those first few days felt very childlike.  The need for comfort, reassurance...much of which I found here in this forum.  Good write, walker.

Tennessee Angel
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5 posted 2001-09-25 10:23 PM


Very impressive!  
Tracey
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6 posted 2001-09-25 11:15 PM


Sadly, we have seen evil all too starkly. Well written

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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