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Hollowman
Member

since 2001-06-01

Posts 117

0 posted 2001-09-19 05:32 PM

Bedtime, time for mind movies
my head so full of you
the images we engineered
poke through this silver heugh

No sound to caress my eardrums
no cables plugged into my mind
just pictures in my darkness
a kaliadascope of the blind

Noted the smiles we wore
focussed, but no concept of time
I indulge myself in us
I dream forever mine

Passions yes I do feel
for a man I am so deep
so my love, just a single kiss
to my lips
Whilst I sleep....
Richy

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

1 posted 2001-09-19 06:40 PM

Passions yes I do feel
for a man I am so deep
so my love, just a single kiss
to my lips
Whilst I sleep....
----------------

A Lovely touching write full of longing.....

I enjoyed it...

Thank you
*******************

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

2 posted 2001-09-19 07:44 PM

I echo Melody, as I also love that last stanza most.....beautiful expressed.

Charisma

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2001-09-19 07:48 PM

Passions yes I do feel
for a man I am so deep
so my love, just a single kiss
to my lips
Whilst I sleep....

This is beautiful....enjoyed!

~Time has cast a spell on you
so you won't ever forget me~

Butterflies_dont_cry
Member Elite

since 2000-03-06

Posts 3733
Michigan

4 posted 2001-09-19 09:56 PM

You've penned the reasons that make it so
difficult to wake up...a beautiful weave~

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2001-09-20 01:09 AM

HollowMan~

'time for mind movies'

I like the very idea of this line~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

6 posted 2001-09-23 02:22 PM

Hollowman-
   Enjoyed these thoughts very much.
   Nicely done.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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