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Charisma
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0 posted 2001-09-19 03:22 PM





Pride

Impressive beauty
strength comforts inner motion
reflection of pride




Charisma
~*TMP*~
19/09/01


© Copyright 2001 Theresia A. Makatita-Poortman - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-09-19 03:41 PM


Beautiful graphic and words to describe it.
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2 posted 2001-09-19 03:48 PM



How wonderful, Charisma!  Both the picture and words are perfect  

Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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3 posted 2001-09-19 03:58 PM


Well done Charisma.
Titia Geertman
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4 posted 2001-09-19 04:53 PM


Oh WOW you're so good at these haikus

Titia

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5 posted 2001-09-20 01:24 AM


Oh,Charisma~
You just always leave us with such beauty~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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6 posted 2001-09-20 01:55 AM


Pride and Strength go hand in hand....
beautiful, always Charisma  

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7 posted 2001-09-20 08:14 AM


I always love a haiku..This one is terrific :-)

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You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face
and show the world all the love in your heart
Then people are gonna treat

vlraynes
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8 posted 2001-09-20 10:58 PM



Charisma-
   You do these so well!
   Just lovely, my friend..
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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9 posted 2001-09-20 11:07 PM


Kewl Charisma...  

Haiku I could never do.

Alan
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10 posted 2001-09-21 12:08 PM


Charisma...this is great. I just love the picture you have. The haiku matches it wonderfully.
alan

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11 posted 2001-09-21 12:50 PM


Now you have hit the spot. Again.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

Charisma
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12 posted 2001-09-23 01:17 PM


Thank you all for your comments, its always a pleasure to have you around. Thank you for reading and so glad you all liked the haiku.


Charisma

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