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True Colors
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True Colors |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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TRUE COLORS Truely, you can all but see, what's Rarely shown to all by We Upholding firmly, banner proud Entangled not by wrappings, shroud Colors, red, white, navy blue Often weaving words thought true Losses great, though flying more Our many colors, shore to shore Reminding all that we are free Standing with true colors, three.  ~Wynter ..flag borrowed from Mysteria's poem..."Wave a Flag for the Children" "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 09-19-2001).] |
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Masked Intruder
Moderator
Senior Member
since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets |
Very good use for the acrostic. Good message. I like your incorporation of the title, twice! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
A well expressed and creative acrostic!  Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Enjoyed immensely! Thank you. ~Time has cast a spell on you |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
!!!!! BEAUTIFUL !!!!! Titia |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Beautiful. I love this. alan |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Great just great. Well done. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
thank you, each..I was in a writing mode yesterday and always enjoy a challenge when I find one...~soft smiles ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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