Open Poetry #16 |
My Country... |
Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
My Country, Right Or Wrong With tear in eye and heart in hand I vow forevermore to love this land, I pledge my devotion to the home of the free give glory to God for this precious destiny, I'll say it loud and I'll say it proud I am Canadian! Brave to the core! I stand united with my people from sapphire sea to shining shore This is the commonwealth of truth, the seventh wonder of liberty, yes, I adore my home sweet home and cherish the gift of democracy ...my country, right or wrong prosperous or faltering weak or strong the majestic North rings heaven's song - to my nation of birth my spirit belongs, for better or worse 'til death do us part Canada the beautiful you own my heart By Melissa P. Monette In memory of the Americans and Canadians who lost their lives in the senseless attack on 9/11/01, this is a great tragedy that has forever changed the world and our hearts... I am truly sorry for the loss, but, I know that America will prevail! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
This is the commonwealth of truth, the seventh wonder of liberty, yes, I adore my home sweet home and cherish the gift of democracy ...my country, right or wrong prosperous or faltering weak or strong ============================ A beautiful sincere declaration of pride and spirit Melis!! This tradgedy has made all nations take account and unify with determination born in pride. well done poetess sister Good to see you back posting take care jm Well tomorrow holds only mystery |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Honeybee-What a splendid write and tribute from your heart. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Beautiful penned, my friend. Thank you for sharing. Charisma |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Melissa, Good write, well done. |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Melissa this is beautiful. Your proud spirit shows through. God Bless us all! God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Thank you! "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
thank you for sharing |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
this could be a song Melissa. . . great job my friend. . . you've done very well. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
'Til Death Us Do Part - I am holding your hand in pride. Beautiful! ~* If you want a rainbow, sometimes you just have to put up with a little rain *~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Well said my fellow Canadian...our hands and hearts reach out across the border to our American friends. ~Time has cast a spell on you |
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shawana Junior Member
since 2000-11-02
Posts 14 |
....we shall live in peace, deep in my heart I do believe we shall live in peace my dear neigbour from St.Catherines...eh?..;-) Salutations from Sarnia, Ontario |
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Chelsea~ Member
since 2001-02-09
Posts 260Ontario, CANADA |
missy I'm sure happy to be Canadian, but, you're the proudest Canadian ever!!!!!! this was sweet and wonderfully patriotic |
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