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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2001-09-19 08:21 AM


Rewrite:

There is Always a Way

They were in love
And could not marry
Due to a cruel
Deficiency of cash
So they took their toys
And pooled them.
Made a grand yard sale
I purchased a trinket
And haven’t seen them since.


© Copyright 2001 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Nan
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1 posted 2001-09-19 08:43 AM


Maybe they'll send a postcard... Very neat, Sy..
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2 posted 2001-09-19 09:04 AM


they are on the Love Boat ...
with Captain Randy Dragon  
enjoyed this trinket of your mind
*winkiewinkie*
me

Well tomorrow holds only mystery
And who's to say what might be
But in you I found a love so strong
The sun and the moon looked on in jealousy

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3 posted 2001-09-19 10:36 AM


hmm..very interesting...

~Wynter

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2001-09-19 10:54 AM


Nan,
Didn't get one yet. LOL *L*

JM,
Glad you enjoyed. Love Sy

Wynter,
Getting any idears? LOL *L*

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5 posted 2001-09-19 11:37 AM


enjoy
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6 posted 2001-09-19 01:57 PM


I think I saw them in Bermuda the other day, though I don't know what I was doing there. *grins*  

Great write!

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7 posted 2001-09-19 02:07 PM


Haven't seen them too....  

Charisma

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8 posted 2001-09-19 03:46 PM


What trinket did you purchase?  I love garage and yard sales...enjoyed!

~Time has cast a spell on you
  so you won't ever forget me~

Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2001-09-19 03:56 PM


Vandana, Thank you.

Masked, Cute, thank you.

Charisma, Keep looking. *L*

Enchantress, An unuasual flower pot. Thank you

Honeybee
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10 posted 2001-09-19 04:01 PM



And I love the trinket of your thoughts, this was cute Sir Sy!  Hey, just think - you helped their love grow  

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2001-09-19 04:03 PM


Melissa,
I do what I can. *L*

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12 posted 2001-09-19 06:12 PM


I think that I might have been there as well my friend. . .

wonderfully done. . .

------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Seymour Tabin
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13 posted 2001-09-19 06:24 PM


Sven,
That could be thanks Sven.

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14 posted 2001-09-21 07:03 AM



I return to find Open Forum 16, and this gem....

this brings the most marvelous smile....thank you, Sy!

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15 posted 2001-09-26 11:22 PM


It's funny how we just randomly touch lives and never know the impact we've had or what we've done to help someone.  Well, I won't ramble but I think this is one of my favorites in a long time, Seymour.  
Tracey
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16 posted 2001-09-27 06:51 AM


How sweet. True love will always find a way

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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