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Dee
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since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

0 posted 2001-09-19 04:00 AM

Just a hint of a wink,
not sure what you saw,
but enough to keep you
coming back for more.

Like a touch, a caress,
a warm breath on your ear,
sweet words whispered gently,
the ones you want to hear.

Makes your heart skip a beat
as she taunts and she teases.
it’s not the way she looks
but the way she pleases.

Though unsure of all this
and what she is here for,
it’s enough to keep you
coming back for more.

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2001-09-19 04:15 AM

Dee~

Oh, Dee ... I like this ! !

'Makes your heart skip a beat
as she taunts and she teases.
it’s not the way she looks
but the way she pleases.'

Oh, yeahhhhhhh !

Nice teasing lilt to the entire piece~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Dee
Member Elite

since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

2 posted 2001-09-19 04:38 AM

Hi Marge, glad you liked it. I think that being cheeky is all part of the fun.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2001-09-19 07:26 AM

Yes I do like that warm breath on the ear...James

Kit McCallum

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Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

4 posted 2001-09-19 07:32 AM

Lovely sentiments Dee, much enjoyed!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

5 posted 2001-09-19 07:38 AM

whats that old saying..."always leave them wanting more"

I enjoyed the sassyness mixed with a touch of longing in this cadence kissed gem from your pen Dee-girlie
groovy new pic too

jm

Well I looked to the sky for my anthem
The words and the music came through
But words and music can never touch
The beauty that I've seen in you

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2001-09-19 11:34 AM

nice and light *s enjoyed your words this morn

~Wynter

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

7 posted 2001-09-19 01:40 PM

what a lovely piece...enjoyed it very much

Charisma

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2001-09-19 03:23 PM

Yes! I love this one...very good.

~Time has cast a spell on you
so you won't ever forget me~

Dee
Member Elite

since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

9 posted 2001-09-19 05:32 PM

James, there's nothing like warm breath on the ear, is there?

Kit, glad you took the time to read and enjoyed it.

JM, Gotta leave em begging

I got tired of the old pic and they say a change is as good as a holiday

Wynter, glad you liked this bit of fun.

Charisma, thanks for taking the time.

Enchantress, thank you. I aim to please.

Thank you all for the way you support and encourage me I really appreciate it.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand

[This message has been edited by Dee (edited 09-19-2001).]

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

10 posted 2001-09-19 09:28 PM

Dee
This was so very beautiful and very much enjoyed. It's nice to read something so lovely after the tragic events of the past week. Take care....Sue

Suetang

EagleOne
Member Elite

since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

11 posted 2001-09-20 04:06 AM

Excellent work my friend, I loved it! You keep writing like this and we'll certainly keep coming back for more!

Take care!

"Let me pierce the realm of glamour
So I know just what I am." ~ Van Morrison

Dee
Member Elite

since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

12 posted 2001-09-20 05:18 AM

Sue, it is nice to have a bit of fun after the horror.

Eddie, hope you always come back for more. I like seeing your comments on my work.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand

Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

13 posted 2001-09-20 02:53 PM

Dee,

Like all your poetry, this is just wonderful.

((((hugs))) my friend.

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

Dee
Member Elite

since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

14 posted 2001-09-20 04:07 PM

Thank you Michael, glad you enjoyed it.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

15 posted 2001-09-23 04:01 PM

Dee-
   Oh...I love the thoughts in this one!
   Very nicely done!
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

RSEvans
Senior Member

since 1999-10-23

Posts 1147
Tulsa, OK, USA

16 posted 2001-09-23 05:02 PM

oh how I can wish to be the Rob this was for...beautiful work Dee.

Dee
Member Elite

since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

17 posted 2001-09-24 02:20 AM

Vicky, I'm glad you liked this. I do too as it gave me a smile while writing it.

Rob, well if you were in Kansas there may have been a chance

as that is where my friend Rob is. Glad you enjoyed it.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand

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