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SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

0 posted 2001-09-19 01:53 AM

it's your touch
that keeps me awake
the want of it
this painful ache

it's your kiss
that I sweetly crave
brings me to my knees
your humble love slave

it's your smile
that smirk of fun
or thoughtful pout
that leaves me undone

it's your eyes
that depth of desire
holding within secrets
of an untamed fire

it's your everything
that makes me feel like I do
knowing I'd do anything
for the love of you.

~SEA~

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

1 posted 2001-09-19 02:02 AM

or thoughtful pout
that leaves me undone

Not sure why but this intrigued me, kept trying to picture it. It's good to read of love again. Thank you, SEA.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-09-19 02:05 AM

the thoughtful pout....

when you are so into what you are thinking or working on that you kinda pout....it's very sexy on men.

that is what I meant. thanks

Masked Intruder

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since 1999-05-23

Posts 1231
Near golden sunsets

3 posted 2001-09-19 03:42 AM

Hey, I know how to do that! *Grins*

Good write, sea. Very captivating!

Dee
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since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

4 posted 2001-09-19 05:46 AM

Beautiful write, Sea. He sounds like he is pretty special

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand

Topheth
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since 2001-09-08

Posts 297
Texas

5 posted 2001-09-19 07:22 AM

Sweet sweet sweet -

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

6 posted 2001-09-19 07:35 AM

Beautiful sentiments Susan.

Best wishes,
/Kit

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2001-09-19 07:43 AM

Sea enjoyed the feelings within your words and liked the comment "It's very sexy on men." I like sexy...James

Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

8 posted 2001-09-19 09:00 AM

I like it a lot Sea.

Charisma

A Whisper's Caress
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since 2000-11-03

Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale

9 posted 2001-09-19 09:03 AM

it's your touch
that keeps me awake
the want of it
this painful ache

what a lovely opening verse for a beautiful poem

May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat...

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

10 posted 2001-09-19 11:08 AM

I do love this one Sea...has all the write feelings in it *s

~Wynterhm I was going to correct the write to right but I think they both work *s

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 09-19-2001).]

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

11 posted 2001-09-19 11:30 AM

Enjoy

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

12 posted 2001-09-19 11:33 AM

A wonderful write, and boy, do I relate!
Haven't you noticed that I relate to almost every one of your poems?!!

Maybe, that's why I'm a big fan of yours

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

13 posted 2001-09-19 07:22 PM

Quiet lovely......lovely....

thank you
***********************

walker
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since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

14 posted 2001-09-19 07:34 PM

Love, love, love is beautiful.

kitkat
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since 2000-01-11

Posts 878
Nova Scotia

15 posted 2001-09-20 08:17 AM

Oh I liked this..feelings straight from the heart.

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You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face
and show the world all the love in your heart
Then people are gonna treat

The Rusty Knight
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since 2001-08-29

Posts 414
Texas

16 posted 2001-09-20 10:53 AM

lovely poem Sea....I am leaving now....to find a mirror to practice my "thoughtful pout"....maybe I can fine a lady to undo with it *S*

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

17 posted 2001-09-20 10:58 AM

She's baaaaaaack and with wonderful verse

Apachecat906
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since 2001-09-04

Posts 217
Michigan, USA

18 posted 2001-09-20 11:42 AM

I want to send this to my ex, but he'd probably be mad. Oh well, maybe not.

Nice simple poem

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

19 posted 2001-09-20 02:22 PM

SEA...You do 'Romantic' exceptionately well!

~Time has cast a spell on you
so you won't ever forget me~

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

20 posted 2001-10-13 09:28 AM

I wasn't around when you posted this, thank goodness for the back pages....

this is beautiful!

The Lady of Shallot
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since 2001-10-03

Posts 818
USA

21 posted 2001-10-14 08:54 PM

this is marvelous!

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

Larry C

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since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

22 posted 2001-10-15 01:39 AM

SEA,
I always thought I was a romantic. But you bring new meaning to the word. How delightful. Thanks.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

23 posted 2001-10-15 01:35 AM

I'd sure like to see a good pout about now, but a playful 'smirk of fun' is the one that would be the undoing of me.
You write some of the very best love stuff!

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