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Ryan
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since 1999-06-10

Posts 297
Kansas

0 posted 2001-09-19 01:27 AM

September, Kansas

Tonight, the cicadal hum
of rain drowns out the
howls of dog day humidity.

Tomorrow, the falling sun
will accent the trees
in shades of red,
like the road
below.

Sigur Ros

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

1 posted 2001-09-19 02:13 AM

I love the title of this. The sounds and colors came through crisp and clear.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-09-19 02:16 AM

I wish I had rain........

this is really good

Masked Intruder

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Senior Member

since 1999-05-23

Posts 1231
Near golden sunsets

3 posted 2001-09-19 03:11 AM

okay, okay, i give in....

cicadal hum outdoes pitterpattering

but i don't think cicadal hum could've fit into mine. it certainly fits into yours...though i don't think pitterpattering would fit into your either.

so i guess we'll just say that both of ours are good? deal?

[This message has been edited by Masked Intruder (edited 09-19-2001).]

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

4 posted 2001-09-19 03:25 AM

oohhh...I LIKE!

But MI is correct..yours fits in with your poem, but it wouldn't fit in with his "Somber"

:supergrins: I do love this though.

Its nice to see you here.

Sometimes the heart needs the solace of solitude and silence.

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

5 posted 2001-09-19 08:27 AM

So - rain cicadally hums... and the sun falls.. KEWL...

Songbird
Member Elite

since 1999-12-15

Posts 2184
Missouri

6 posted 2001-09-19 09:41 AM

Like the images protrayed here. It is raining here at this very moment without and within. Thank you for a good read.

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2001-09-19 10:31 AM

nicely written..fall comes too quickly *s

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2001-09-19 02:49 PM

I'll bet the cicadas were humming before the rain started to pitter-patter. *S* I enjoyed this one. Thank you.

~Time has cast a spell on you
so you won't ever forget me~

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

9 posted 2001-09-20 10:04 PM

Ryan-
  Short and sweet.
  Enjoyed this.
  ~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

[This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 09-20-2001).]

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

10 posted 2001-09-21 08:17 AM

You have our haven down to the nitty gritty...

well done, Sir!

SpitFire
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since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

11 posted 2001-09-22 06:12 PM

~Ooh,...how neat. It's gorgeous. Quite pleased to have stopped here. *Peace.

Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

12 posted 2001-09-22 06:36 PM

Just one word

WOW

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/

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