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Topheth
Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 297
Texas

0 posted 2001-09-18 11:04 PM




True Colors


They
react
understandably
envious
-
craving
our
love,
our
resplendent
souls.


[This message has been edited by Topheth (edited 09-18-2001).]

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Pip
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since 2001-09-14
Posts 59

1 posted 2001-09-18 11:06 PM


oooooo, I think I like this one the best so far, challenge-wise!  Good good good job!
Alan
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since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499
right next door
2 posted 2001-09-18 11:08 PM


Way to go...this is good.
alan

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3 posted 2001-09-19 01:43 AM


huh? what?! oh yeah, the poem   sorry stuck looking at those eyes   the poem is great. I like acrostics. well done  

"It's true/the way I feel
was promised by your face
the sound of your voice
painted on my memories
even if you're not with me
I'm with you"
~LP~

Bilby
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since 2001-07-31
Posts 14
Northern Territory, Australia
4 posted 2001-09-19 01:48 AM


Neatly understated and well formed.
cheers,
Alan

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