My response to the acrostic challenge

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Alan
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since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

0 posted 2001-09-18 10:09 PM

Time Lost
Remembrances gone
Undying love
Eternally lost

Cherished moments
Once in a life time
Love into the heart does climb
Only you can keep it
Remember to totally commit
Savor each and every moment

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2001-09-18 10:13 PM

Beautiful Alan. Well done...enjoyed. Nancy.

~Time has cast a spell on you
so you won't ever forget me~

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2001-09-18 10:16 PM

You'll notice I only signed this one once!! Nancy

~Time has cast a spell on you
so you won't ever forget me~

Pip
Member

since 2001-09-14

Posts 59

3 posted 2001-09-18 10:18 PM

Carpe diem! Gotta love it!

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2001-09-19 01:45 AM

very nice Alan

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2001-09-19 04:11 AM

Alan~
Very, very nicely done.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

6 posted 2001-09-19 09:21 AM

I shall cherish your words
so very, very much
Alan dear friend
My heart you touch
Hope

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2001-09-19 10:34 AM

very nicely done

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

8 posted 2001-09-19 11:00 AM

very lovely....

Charisma

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

9 posted 2001-09-20 09:59 PM

Alan-
  I'm liking this lots!
  Very nicely said in just a few words.
  Enjoyed.
  Hugs,
  ~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

10 posted 2001-09-20 10:27 PM

Alan~

A wonderful acrostic, with a great message!

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

11 posted 2001-09-20 10:33 PM

Alan
Truer words have never been spoken. I agree with everything you said. The trivial things just don't matter any more and we must cherish what we have.
Take care......Sue

Suetang

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

12 posted 2001-09-20 10:40 PM

Thank you everyone. I have another one if you think you can handle it.
alan

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