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rosepetals25
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0 posted 2001-09-18 10:06 PM



Lingering

The bliss you give me
Goes beyond what words can say
Lingers in my heart
Showing me that anything
Is possible with your love



The look in your eyes
Lingers in my memories
Filling my soul with
A new peace I never thought
I would come to discover



The words you whisper
Lingers in my dreams of you
In the life we share
Giving me more than I could
Ever hope for, want or need


TaraB

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1 posted 2001-09-18 10:17 PM


ooo, how romantic!
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2 posted 2001-09-18 10:25 PM



Tara, what a sincere offering of devotion and love for David! Well expressed.  And, I like the heart graphics   You go girl!~

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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3 posted 2001-09-18 11:18 PM


Very nice.. lucky guy!
Alan
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4 posted 2001-09-18 11:19 PM


This is nice. I loved it. Romantic
alan

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5 posted 2001-09-18 11:31 PM


Tara...lovely and very romantic....enjoyed!

~Time has cast a spell on you
  so you won't ever forget me~

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6 posted 2001-09-18 11:40 PM


Great (and rare) expression of contentedness.
rosepetals25
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7 posted 2001-09-18 11:57 PM


Pip - Thank you   Welcome to Passions

Melissa -   Dave is my inspiration for living.  I am a lucky girl. And thank you for the help with the hearts

Songbird - I am the lucky one by far Thanks for stopping in.

Alan - I'm glad you liked it Thank you.

Enchantress -   Well thank you hehe.  I'm happy you liked the poem.

RSWells - Thank you. I'm happy you liked it

TaraB

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with you
8 posted 2001-09-19 02:14 AM


RP~   you do romance beautifully.....sigh  
love this one  

Dee
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9 posted 2001-09-19 05:52 AM


Ain't love grand  
This is lovely, Tara. So sweet and touching.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life.     a brand

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10 posted 2001-09-19 03:05 PM


A good place to linger...James
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11 posted 2001-09-19 04:05 PM


how beautiful penned and so romantic....well done!

Charisma

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12 posted 2001-09-20 11:09 AM


enjoy
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13 posted 2001-09-20 02:51 PM


Tara,

This is both sweet and lovely.  He's a lucky man.  

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.  

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