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Enotneicna
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0 posted 2001-09-18 06:12 PM


The challenge words are True Colors

Here is mine


Timed precision
Ruthless accuracy
Untold losses
Emergency efforts launched

Clouds of fear disipate and
Open on a beacon to
Light the way to Unity
Oh, the fierce eagle wakes
Roused from peaceful bliss
Searching for justice she sharpens her talons.

Enotneicna
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Words are my medicine.
Read and live and love and heal!



© Copyright 2001 Sharon Lee Wilcox (Enotneicna) - All Rights Reserved
Topheth
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1 posted 2001-09-18 06:45 PM


Nicely done - express well with a minimum.
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2 posted 2001-09-18 09:08 PM


Well-said!  Excellent word choices!
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3 posted 2001-09-18 09:09 PM


I love it!  

Sometimes the heart needs the solace of solitude and silence.

Alan
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4 posted 2001-09-18 09:55 PM


I like the way you have written this. Plus it has a good message in it.
alan

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5 posted 2001-09-19 01:48 AM


Enotneicna~
My friend ... wonderful as usual~
*gentle praise*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                                   noles1@totcon.com            

Enotneicna
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6 posted 2001-09-19 05:52 PM


Thanks you all.

It is a challenge if anyone would like to try it.

Many Blessings!
Always,
Eno

Words are my medicine.
Read and live and love and heal!



vlraynes
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7 posted 2001-09-20 09:42 PM



Enotneicna-
   Very nicely said, my friend.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky




"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

[This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 09-20-2001).]

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