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pugsley
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0 posted 2001-09-26 04:15 AM


Upon your creation, God broke the mold
a beautiful vision to behold.
The envy of both Kings and Queens
for a beauty so fair they would risk many things.
Beauty so fair cannot be duplicated
though many have tried they have as yet to make it.
You enter a room and men fight for a try
to have one so lovely stand by their side.
But the beauty that I find I cannot deny
is the beautiful heart that is kept deep inside.
It's the beautiful heart of the fairest of Queens
a beauty reserved just for fairy tale dreams.
When I look in your eyes I see love that's so true
it outweighs all physical beauty seen in you.
You see, true beauty is not found in magazines
it cannot be whipped up with make-ups and creams.
True beauty's a blessing, a gift from above
and can only be seen through the kind eyes of love.
And my vow to you now so the whole world can see
is to treat you with the same love you show to me.
Love so strong it weakens the strongest of men
I feel my love for you growing again and again.
If I have but one wish to wish before I die
it will be to forever have you at my side...

© Copyright 2001 pugsley - All Rights Reserved
Ann
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1 posted 2001-09-26 06:19 AM


This is a very passionate and heartfelt poem...i enjoyed reading it alot   God bless and all the best,

~ANN~

Tracey
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where insanity meets breeding
2 posted 2001-09-26 07:21 AM


Ah, this is lovely. What beautiful emotions you convey for your loved one. Welcome, I look forward to seeing more

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2001-09-26 09:24 AM



A wonderful entrance into the world of Passions...Welcome!  

Please, check your e-mail for a special greeting!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




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Gaia
4 posted 2001-09-26 06:24 PM


What a beautiful beginning! I'm sure this is just the first step in your love affair with Passions. What a passionate, lovely tribute to your sweetheart.
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2001-09-26 07:28 PM


Beautifully expressed!!  
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!
I know you will love it here.


~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~
  

pugsley
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6 posted 2001-09-26 09:28 PM


I thank all of you for your wonderful reply's
JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
7 posted 2001-09-27 02:55 PM


Very nice Pugsley...James
MyEnchanted_Melody
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since 2001-05-30
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across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
8 posted 2001-09-28 08:11 AM




"Beauty is skin deep"

A lovely and truly beautiful piece...

Thank you
**********************

RosePetal
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9 posted 2001-09-28 06:29 PM


Hey Pugs

What a romantic poem...Welcome to Passions!!
I'm sure you will love it here : )

Titia Geertman
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Netherlands
10 posted 2001-09-28 06:39 PM


Welcome pugsley and thanks for sharing your beauty with us.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/

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