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Nikolette Sadness
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0 posted 2001-09-21 11:49 PM


i'm just starting with a title

~The Hands~

they were found
ever bound
among the dusty grave
many knew
their nightmares true
to die this awful way
ever fearing
the death so nearing
to take their lives away
many lost
among the dust
upon eternal grave
but the hands
will pray forever
never memories fade

Nikolette Sadness

(~The Hands~ is dedicated to those who parished on the second day of infamy, 9/11/01)


i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness.


[This message has been edited by Nikolette Sadness (edited 09-21-2001).]

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Elizabeth
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1 posted 2001-09-22 07:31 PM


Welcome back Nikolette. I liked this a lot...wonderful work here.

God bless America, my home sweet home.

Nikolette Sadness
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2 posted 2001-09-26 12:22 PM


thanx elizabeth...i hope others liked it too

nik

i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness.

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