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FireDancer123
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since 2001-06-14
Posts 43
Virginia

0 posted 2001-09-19 08:23 PM



blue eyes rain on me a burning new york style  
acidic holes eroded deep to the core

when I forgot to forget him all over again
I pinched myself for allowing another regret rush

willow enticing the lake with drooping branches
she was nature's sexy depression addict

making sense of this is connecting poetic dots
scrambled and seemingly senseless until colored in

"If you've never stared off into the distance, then your life is a shame." - A.Duritz
"Eat drink and be merry, for tomorrow we die." - Dave Matthews

© Copyright 2001 Kelly - All Rights Reserved
EagleOne
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since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...
1 posted 2001-09-20 06:02 AM


I enjoyed reading this!

"Let me pierce the realm of glamour
So I know just what I am." ~ Van Morrison


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