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Remembering tragedy

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Brad Majors
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0 posted 09-18-2001 04:38 PM       View Profile for Brad Majors   Email Brad Majors   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Brad Majors

Early          morn
great           birds
rain             fire
capitalist    landmarks
fall              down
down           heaven
black           with
ash               under      
miles            steel
and               concrete
dead             reminisce
last                thoughts
as                  walking
pictures         grasp
waning           hope
Wiping          tears
world             looks
on                   shock
terror              anger
rage                hate
consume         slipping
eternal             hell

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1 posted 09-18-2001 06:13 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Brad---I enjoyed the visual of your twin towers of words--the economy of your words was effective and moving. Great job here!
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What a neat presentation!
Terrific imagery  

When words cannot bear the burden of thought,
it is the poet who lends them strength,
hoisting the thoughts within reach of us all.
  

[This message has been edited by Pell (edited 09-18-2001).]

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Brad~
Quite effectively portrayed.

'last                thoughts
as                  walking
pictures         grasp
waning           hope
Wiping          tears'


And the tears keep falling~
As the wait goes on ......
~*Marge*~

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oh Brad! This is awesome!!!
 
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