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Power Of The Rain

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DreamRomancer
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0 posted 09-18-2001 11:13 AM       View Profile for DreamRomancer   Email DreamRomancer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for DreamRomancer

Within the rain, a secret power thus hide
With eyes closed and hands at your side
Feel the coolness slide down your cheek
With lips closed, do not speak
The cleansing smell fills the soul
Serenity meaning the ultimate goal
Our love grows strong
As the showers linger long
Your lips on mine
Drops tickle the spine
Nature's sensuous gift
Our spirits uplift
Amidst sprinkles, feelings expressed
My undying love to you confessed
Upon the grass we're lain
Knowing it's the power of the rain

With my pen I shall create,
With my mind I shall explore,
With my strength I shall endure,
With my poetry I shall have legacy.

© Copyright 2001 Jeffrey McMillion - All Rights Reserved
Domzi
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since 09-08-2001
Posts 303
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1 posted 09-18-2001 11:16 AM       View Profile for Domzi   Email Domzi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Domzi

I felt every line of this poem.
I really liked it.
NightShadow
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since 09-04-2001
Posts 134
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2 posted 09-18-2001 11:26 AM       View Profile for NightShadow   Email NightShadow   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit NightShadow's Home Page   View IP for NightShadow

Very nice poem.. you do have a good way with words.. keep up the good poetry.. cant wait for more posts!

A Life without Love, is no life at all...

Janet Marie
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since 01-22-2000
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3 posted 09-18-2001 01:01 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

This is lovely,
softly sensual and cadenced kissed....
welcome to Poetry Land DR,
its so nice to have you here with us.
jm

Well I looked to the sky for my anthem
The words and the music came through
But words and music can never touch
The beauty that I've seen in you

RosePetal
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4 posted 09-18-2001 01:47 PM       View Profile for RosePetal   Email RosePetal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RosePetal

I like this, Very nicely written

((hugs))

RosePetal

p.s. Thank you for replying to my poem earlier.
JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA


5 posted 09-18-2001 03:33 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Enjoyed reading your poem...James
Sven
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6 posted 09-18-2001 07:19 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

I love the rain. . . you've shown it well here. . .

great job, and welcome. . .

-------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Enchantress
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Somewhere in time~


7 posted 09-18-2001 11:21 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

Enjoyed...enjoyed...smiling all the while!

~Time has cast a spell on you
  so you won't ever forget me~

passing shadows
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8 posted 06-01-2004 04:09 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

it's raining right now here in Florida...and I LOVE IT!
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