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Sunnyone
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Staffordshire, England

0 posted 2001-09-17 01:27 PM




I'm just a little songbird, one that you set free,
waiting to take off in flight, with you to always be
My heart is there already, my kisses on the way
I hope you know your songbird dreams of loving you today!


So, stretch your arm out gently, so  I can softly light
Then take me to our nest so I can rest after my flight
I'll always be your songbird, and to your heart I'll bring
my song of love and evermore, for you, my love, I'll sing!

The road goes on forever, and the stories never end...
  
    


© Copyright 2001 Sunnyone - All Rights Reserved
Pip
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1 posted 2001-09-17 02:17 PM


Exquisite thoughts
Professor Gloom
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of Depression
2 posted 2001-09-17 02:18 PM


Very nice,
I sure the intended,
your nesting partner enjoys this
lovely little song.

Gloom

MyEnchanted_Melody
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since 2001-05-30
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across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
3 posted 2001-09-17 03:22 PM




Oh....just go on singing your beautiful songs

We'll hear them.....

Lovely ....lovely write....

I loved it.....

Thank you
**************************

Songbird
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Missouri
4 posted 2001-09-17 07:10 PM


I'm very happy I flew in here. It's a happy song you're singing.
Ariana
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5 posted 2001-09-17 07:28 PM


Sunny

I can hear the sweet melody - like the kind that lifts up your heart and you want to sing.  After you make your flight - don't you forget us!!!!  Very lovely indeed.

songstress51
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since 2001-09-15
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Anytown, USA
6 posted 2001-09-17 07:32 PM


hey Sunny

Thanks for turning me on to this board!  These people are GREAT!!!

Nice work, by the way!  Hope all is well.



Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
7 posted 2001-09-17 08:07 PM


Quite lovely and very lyrical...enjoyed.

~Time has cast a spell on you
  so you won't ever forget me~

RSWells
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8 posted 2001-09-17 10:20 PM


Very melodious and lucky recipient.
Topheth
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9 posted 2001-09-17 11:32 PM


I love!  Great flow and thoughts, Sunnyone.
Midnitesun
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Gaia
10 posted 2001-09-18 12:20 PM


What a nice, sunny song, Sunnyone.
Thanks for lifting my spirits up high
on the wings of a songbird.

Sunnyone
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Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
11 posted 2001-09-18 07:10 AM


~~~ PIP ~~~
Thank you so much!!

~~~ Gloom ~~~
yes, he did, and I thank you!!

~~~ MyEnchanted_Melody ~~~
thank you for listening, and I will keep writing, as my heart is full of songs!!

~~~ Songbird ~~~
oh, it's so nice to be joined by another songbird!!  Glad you flew in also!!!!

~~~ Ariana ~~~
No, I could never forget my first home and family here...I love you all!!!

~~~ songstress51 ~~~
I just knew that you would love being part of this family!!  Enjoy and God Bless!!

~~~ Enchantress ~~~
Ah, I'm glad my little song brightened your day!!

~~~ RSW ~~~
thank you so much, and glad you enjoyed!!

~~~ Topheth ~~~
hope you enjoyed this flight of my fancy and I thank you!!!

~~~ Midnitesun ~~~
Ah yes, and up here where we live, the eagles sing the most beautiful song of them all!  Thank you, my friend!!

The road goes on forever, and the stories never end...
  
    


passing shadows
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12 posted 2004-06-01 04:14 AM


very sweet
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