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GhostWriter_6
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0 posted 2001-09-17 06:40 AM



“Fairy Tales”


Fairy tales and happily ever after stories are all make believe
I’ve tried so hard to find a princess, but no female so far has met my needs.
I wanted to turn ordinary rocks into gems,
I want to take someone and spend the rest of my life with them.
I tried so hard to get everyone’s foot to fit in that glass slipper,
However no one’s personality was right… so the slipper they could not enter.
Why can’t I find my Cinderella, or my Sleeping Beauty?
Of find my Snow White and live happily ever after like in those Disney movies.

[This message has been edited by GhostWriter_6 (edited 09-17-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Antonio Marquis Bankhead - All Rights Reserved
RosePetal
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1 posted 2001-09-17 01:10 PM


Ghost..

You have not searched thoroughly for your princess..I am right here in south florida! hehehe but on a serious note..with time and patience you will find ms. right...Arent those disney movies so great though?!

Pip
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2 posted 2001-09-17 02:15 PM


Antonio,

Wonderful incorporation of the fantastic into real life.  Very well done

Domzi
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3 posted 2001-09-17 04:15 PM


How many times do I have to tell you...click your heels three times and bring your butt up here to Brooklyn (lol).
You know I was feeling this poem.

As my borough has always stated- Do or Die.

MyEnchanted_Melody
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across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
4 posted 2001-09-17 04:24 PM




Your fairy tale would become true
as yur princess comes in time to you


A very nice write.....
I enjoyed it.....

Thank you
***********************

The Rusty Knight
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5 posted 2001-09-17 05:15 PM


Ghost,
You have to kiss some frogs before you find a princess. So pucker up, the search is half the fun.  Just don't wait till you get so old it is more fun to have a talking frog than a voluptuous princess.  
This was said with tounge in cheek so ladies don't jump on me about kissing frogs to find a prince. I know we are harder to find *S*

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
6 posted 2001-09-17 08:30 PM


Ghost...Maybe you're trying to hard to find her. You know what they say about...'when you least expect it'  Enjoyed the write!   Have to go and kiss a few frogs now..."Some day my Prince will come....lalalalalaaaa."   Nancy. (P.S. Yeah right Rusty!)

~Time has cast a spell on you
  so you won't ever forget me~

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7 posted 2002-02-08 11:31 PM




(big hugggsssssss) So very sad but beautiful, sweet friend, I know just how you feel, but I know deep down all your dreams will come true so very soon and the princess of your heart will dance with you forever and love you forever! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet friend, all our hearts are with you! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Antonio, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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