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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2001-09-15 05:00 PM


A Rose for Each Soul

A blood red rose as diadem
Translucent beauty on a stem
As soothing as a velvet glove
A vesture of our heart and love

Cut, dethroned below the bell
Honey sweet with heavens smell.
Offered up in sympathy
Placed in waters empathy.

Symbolic symbol placed a pond
The dust of litters great beyond
Watered with the tears of goals
Promises of hearts and souls

You are our cry of Alamo
Death for a death its credo
We will not rest until it’s done
For we will strike each blow as one

This apple has a rotten core
And will stink forever more.


© Copyright 2001 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2001-09-15 05:18 PM



Sometimes, I am beyond words,
but Sy this...shall be heard

RSEvans
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2 posted 2001-09-15 05:20 PM


Beautiful and poignant...a fitting tribute to something that cannot be placed into words...
Janet Marie
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3 posted 2001-09-15 06:08 PM


A blood red rose as diadem
Translucent beauty on a stem
As soothing as a velvet glove
A vesture of our heart and love

Cut, dethroned below the bell
Honey sweet with heavens smell.
Offered up in sympathy
Placed in waters empathy.

Symbolic symbol placed a pond
The dust of litters great beyond
Watered with the tears of goals
Promises of hearts and souls
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when your muse is well inspired...so few can touch the things thy pen gifts us with.
thank you for the rose rhymes...petals on the sands of time...
a beautiful tribute with a morale of wisdom and truth.......
love ya WinkieStinky
me




Well I looked to the sky for my anthem
The words and the music came through
But words and music can never touch
The beauty that I've seen in you

catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
4 posted 2001-09-15 09:11 PM


Wow, this started out as a tribute and ended with a fierce declaration. Really well done. Take care.
Sandra

Nan
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5 posted 2001-09-16 08:07 AM


A rose for each soul - just might reach around the world, dear Sy..
Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
6 posted 2001-09-16 09:44 AM


Sunshine, Thank you *L*

RSEvans, Nice comment.

JM, I'll meet you in the land of dreams.
Winkiewinkie Stinky

Cat, Thank yo so much Sandra.

Nan, I hope so. *L*

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