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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2001-09-13 04:12 PM


Within A Silk Kiss

Remoisten your lips
my silky sweetheart.
For many of mine kisses
I am about to impart.
For you have captured my soul
my silky sweetheart.
Sweet lips carry me to heaven
my heart never to depart
from the marvelous bliss
within a silk kiss.
Sweet savory nectar
imparted thru kiss.
Succulent and softly
as she moistens her lips.

Jameslee
September13,2001

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1 posted 2001-09-13 04:17 PM


*sigh*
James, I love it when you write like this  

"It's true/the way I feel
was promised by your face
the sound of your voice
painted on my memories
even if you're not with me
I'm with you"
~LP~

Domzi
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since 2001-09-08
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2 posted 2001-09-13 06:53 PM


Poetry like this makes me
want to grab my boyfriend
a lay one on him.
I love poetry like this.

Honeybee
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Ontario, CANADA
3 posted 2001-09-13 08:58 PM



James, I love your sensuality in this!  Well expressed~

Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

anonymousfemale
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4 posted 2001-09-14 05:15 AM


This is so beautiful...
The way you have written it is so sensual and just makes you float.  

Well done.  

~AF~

"Kelly's my Hero!" "No, Kelly's your heroine." "Kelly has heroin??" "What?"

Dee
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5 posted 2001-09-14 05:15 PM


Very soft and tender, James. I loved this.

Dee

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6 posted 2001-09-14 06:17 PM


love it James  

Charisma

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