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Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

0 posted 2001-09-12 10:36 PM

Things I Love
The gentle touch of your hands
Upon my old hands
Your big beautiful eyes

Your warm gentle smile
That told me you would be around awhile
Your gentle words

The taste of your lips
As into a dream I seemed to slip
Praying never to awake

I miss the way I felt
When you made my heart melt
For the first and last time

As I lay in your arms
Knowing all your charms
Knowing I am here to stay

For your love I long
In your arms I belong
Never shall I leave

alan
09/10/01

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

1 posted 2001-09-12 10:46 PM

Alan
This was so very beautiful and so romantic. It was nice to read something so lovely after all the depressing events of yesterday. Take care......Sue

Suetang

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2001-09-12 10:55 PM

*Sigh* Yes, romantic and quite gentle. Thanks Alan. Stay safe. Nancy.

~Time has cast a spell on you
so you won't ever forget me~

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2001-09-12 10:55 PM

*Sigh* Yes, romantic and quite gentle. Thanks Alan. Stay safe. Nancy.

~Time has cast a spell on you
so you won't ever forget me~

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2001-09-13 12:01 PM

beautiful Alan.....
you must melt her

"It's true/the way I feel
was promised by your face
the sound of your voice
painted on my memories
even if you're not with me
I'm with you"
~Lin

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

5 posted 2001-09-13 06:21 AM

thank you for sharing this beauty

Charisma

Dee
Member Elite

since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

6 posted 2001-09-13 06:23 AM

Yes it is nice to see some beauty at the moment. Very nicely put Alan.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

7 posted 2001-09-13 08:22 AM

Sue..thank you..I actually wrote this Monday the day before our world fell apart..just could not bring myself to post it.

Enchantress...you must really like it..hehehe..replying twice..made me smile...

Sea..melt her? she doesn't like poetry...wish she did..

Charmisa..thank you for reading it...even in the darkest times the world needs love.

Dee...Thank you Dee...

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2001-09-13 04:02 PM

Who could ask for anything more...James

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

9 posted 2001-09-13 06:53 PM

Just write her a letter with all this said in it..... if she doesn't like poetry ... she might enjoy a love letter... who wouldn't...
Beautiful!!!!!

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