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MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21
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In a corporeal internship...

0 posted 2001-09-11 08:48 AM


Curves

Beyond sight

Tonight
You'll crash
And awaken
To nerves tingling

Reward found


In calm peace


(Copyright 2001 by: MARK V SHELDON)


"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS


© Copyright 2001 Mark V Sheldon - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-09-11 08:51 AM


ah again you capture the essence...and with a few words leave the reader to build the story on their own..the outline and image clear...

good stuff Mark!

Voiceless
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since 2001-02-19
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Under the stars upon the wind
2 posted 2001-09-11 05:11 PM


Great job, the point is very clear.
You just got to like to the point
short poems!

Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial)

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