I Have To Remind Myself To Breathe---for you love

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Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

0 posted 2001-09-11 12:31 PM

Ride the wind wild
across a storm tossed sea
Touch the sky with an echo
pulled from the depths of a sigh
Dream higher and farther
than yesterdays song
Breathe

Sing the stars softly
down out of the sky
Shiver at the whispers
of your love
Cradled in the shelter of
your arms
Breathe

Dance to the rhythm of
the rain as it falls
Shattered by the thunder
in your kiss
Driven by the current
in your eyes
Breathe

Tempt me to torment
on kiss swollen lips
Tease me with desire
filled eyes
Love me til dawn
lightens the sky
Breathe

Breathe

Just breathe

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

1 posted 2001-09-11 12:45 PM

Tempt me to torment
on kiss swollen lips
Tease me with desire
filled eyes
Love me til dawn
lightens the sky
Breathe

Remembering this feeling...wishing you the best that love can be. There's nothing more striking than a poet in love.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2001-09-11 01:00 AM

Ride the wind wild
across a storm tossed sea
Touch the sky with an echo
pulled from the depths of a sigh
Dream higher and farther
than yesterdays song
Breathe

Sing the stars softly
down out of the sky
Shiver at the whispers
of your love
Cradled in the shelter of
your arms
Breathe

Dance to the rhythm of
the rain as it falls
Shattered by the thunder
in your kiss
Driven by the current
in your eyes
Breathe
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I must agree with Duncan....
this level of inspire is striking......
one of your finest Paula...this is lovely
If you can write like this holding your breath...imagine what you'll be capable of when you exhale

very very well done poetess P.
jm

Well I looked to the sky for my anthem
The words and the music came through
But words and music can never touch
The beauty that I've seen in you

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2001-09-11 01:13 AM

Paula~
This is so lovely~
You wear love well~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2001-09-11 01:27 AM

"Dance to the rhythm of
the rain as it falls
Shattered by the thunder
in your kiss
Driven by the current
in your eyes
Breathe"

WOW Paula........

wow......this is wonderful

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2001-09-11 03:18 PM

Kiss swollen lips huh...how wonderful...James

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2001-09-12 07:08 PM

breathe in the love. . . and breathe out the happiness. . .

wonderful my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2004-04-19 10:45 AM

Wonderful poem. Happy that it got published.
And ... those "kiss swollen lips" sent me right back into some sweetly cherished memories!
Love, Margherita

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