How to Join Member's Area Private Library Search Today's Topics p Login
Main Forums Discussion Tech Talk Mature Content Archives
   Nav Win
 Archives
 Open Poetry #15 Archive
 I Have To Remind Myself To Breathe---for
 1 2 3 4 5 6 7
Follow us on Facebook

 This is an Archive. You may post a reply, but new topics are not allowed.

 
User Options
Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Admin Print Send ECard
Passions in Poetry

I Have To Remind Myself To Breathe---for you love

 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
Paula Finn
Member Ascendant
since 06-17-2000
Posts 5525
missouri


0 posted 09-11-2001 12:31 AM       View Profile for Paula Finn   Email Paula Finn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Paula Finn

Ride the wind wild
across a storm tossed sea
Touch the sky with an echo
pulled from the depths of a sigh
Dream higher and farther
than yesterdays song
Breathe

Sing the stars softly
down out of the sky
Shiver at the whispers
of your love
Cradled in the shelter of
your arms
Breathe

Dance to the rhythm of
the rain as it falls
Shattered by the thunder
in your kiss
Driven by the current
in your eyes
Breathe

Tempt me to torment
on kiss swollen lips
Tease me with desire
filled eyes
Love me til dawn
lightens the sky
Breathe

Breathe

Just breathe
© Copyright 2001 Paula Finn - All Rights Reserved
Duncan
Member Ascendant
since 08-07-2001
Posts 5716


1 posted 09-11-2001 12:45 AM       View Profile for Duncan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Duncan

Tempt me to torment
on kiss swollen lips
Tease me with desire
filled eyes
Love me til dawn
lightens the sky
Breathe


Remembering this feeling...wishing you the best that love can be.  There's nothing more striking than a poet in love.
Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 01-22-2000
Posts 18986


2 posted 09-11-2001 01:00 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Ride the wind wild
across a storm tossed sea
Touch the sky with an echo
pulled from the depths of a sigh
Dream higher and farther
than yesterdays song
Breathe

Sing the stars softly
down out of the sky
Shiver at the whispers
of your love
Cradled in the shelter of
your arms
Breathe

Dance to the rhythm of
the rain as it falls
Shattered by the thunder
in your kiss
Driven by the current
in your eyes
Breathe
==============================

I must agree with Duncan....
this level of inspire is striking......
one of your finest Paula...this is lovely
If you can write like this holding your breath...imagine what you'll be capable of when you exhale  
very very well done poetess P.
jm

Well I looked to the sky for my anthem
The words and the music came through
But words and music can never touch
The beauty that I've seen in you

Marge Tindal
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 11-06-1999
Posts 43042
Florida's Foreverly Shores


3 posted 09-11-2001 01:13 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Paula~
This is so lovely~
You wear love well~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                                   noles1@totcon.com            

SEA
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 Tours
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 01-18-2000
Posts 24152
with you


4 posted 09-11-2001 01:27 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

"Dance to the rhythm of
the rain as it falls
Shattered by the thunder
in your kiss
Driven by the current
in your eyes
Breathe"

WOW Paula........ wow......this is wonderful  
JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 11-16-1999
Posts 31622
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA


5 posted 09-11-2001 03:18 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Kiss swollen lips huh...how wonderful...James
Sven
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 11-23-1999
Posts 15611
Lansing, MI USA


6 posted 09-12-2001 07:08 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

breathe in the love. . . and breathe out the happiness. . .  

wonderful my friend. . .

---------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 02-08-2003
Posts 21103
Eternity


7 posted 04-19-2004 10:45 AM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

Wonderful poem. Happy that it got published.
And ... those "kiss swollen lips" sent me right back into some sweetly cherished memories!
Love, Margherita
 
 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
All times are ET (US) Top
  User Options
>> Archives >> Open Poetry #15 >> I Have To Remind Myself To Breathe---for Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Print Send ECard

 

pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Today's Topics | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary



© Passions in Poetry and netpoets.com 1998-2013
All Poetry and Prose is copyrighted by the individual authors