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Apachecat906
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0 posted 2001-09-10 04:53 PM


Please see my post in feelings
With life I'm just not dealing
It seems I only make mistakes
This is only one more I had to make
Begging for your help I'm wrong
But I feel like I won't make it long
So if you can all please forgive
Give me a moment so I may live
It seems I only make mistakes
This is only one more I had to make
Please read my thoughts in the other room
Help me relieve this sickening gloom

--Carrie
:sobbing:

© Copyright 2001 Carrie A. Mead - All Rights Reserved
SEA
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with you
1 posted 2001-09-10 05:31 PM


Carrie, I'm so sorry your heart is hurting. I hope you are ok. and check your email   ~SEA
MyEnchanted_Melody
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across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
2 posted 2001-09-10 06:18 PM



Oh.....
Don't be sad
don't cry
we will be here
reading
and help you to get through

I'm sorry you feel that way.....I hope you soon feel just great and smile...

Thank you
***********************

Sven
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3 posted 2001-09-10 06:46 PM


we all make mistakes. . . as long as we learn from them. . .

just write it out my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Daniel van Vliet
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4 posted 2001-09-11 12:11 PM


Don't Stop to think.... just keep writing!
Apachecat906
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5 posted 2001-09-13 10:35 AM


Hi everyone,

thanks for your kind words in response to my poem/request.  I am feeling much better today.  In light of Tuesday's events, even if things stink for me personally at the moment, it sure could be worse.  I hope everyone out there is safe and that your friends and family are safe. Again thanks for your   support, your words have helped get me through.

Peace and Love,
Carrie  

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