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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2001-09-10 02:56 PM



He said I looked of 43,
I kissed his cheek of red.
Those carnies, they are wild at times
and play those games we dread.

I chose not weight nor month of birth
for I knew I would win.
I chanced the take and won the prize
and left him with a grin.


~Wynter...York Fair 2001

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



© Copyright 2001 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
RSWells
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since 2001-06-17
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1 posted 2001-09-10 03:42 PM


Sounds as though you both won.
Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
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Staffordshire, England
2 posted 2001-09-11 08:41 AM


yes, yes.....always leave them smiling, and you have me smiling here!!  

The road goes on forever, and the stories never end...
  
    


Cpat Hair
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3 posted 2001-09-11 08:45 AM


my dear..you are a prize...

enjoyed the verse as I have the others you have posted of late...

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
4 posted 2001-09-21 11:14 PM


RSWells ..ah yes..I won that's for sure *s


Sunnyone ...glad I left you smiling *s thank you

Cpat Hair..you make me smile today  thanks ((hugs))I don't know what's come over me..  but I am happy you are enjoying my words of late.

~Wynter  

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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