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Twenty or Less...#54 |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Lifeless life Lost Writhing lonliness Struggling with a disturbed existence Restlessness haunts Behind your parade To leave this Without dread (Copyright 2001 by: MARK V SHELDON) "It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself." |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Oh......yes......it seems the autumn spirit is at the door... I am left with such a deep bitter feeling as if I have seen the desert of my own mind and the wind whistling on that plain. Powerful as usual and quietly and bitterly sad or so I felt. Thank you Mark ************************* |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
My Melody, Autumn's spirit has definitely already floated through the door. Bitter? Hmmm... not really, but indeed sad to allow events to turn to such when there are always so many more options in the bigger picture, outside of the microscopic walls which seem to barracade one's self... -MVS "It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself." |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Autumn, to me, is a most peaceful time...a time of settling down, not unlike the moments of peace before one slips into a deep and restful sleep. Wonderful write, MVS! The road goes on forever, and the stories never end... |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Very nice Mark... sorry I haven't had time to comment on all your verse..but have enjoyed them all... your series of 20 or less has also inspired a couple of others to try their hand at it..and the results of all have been pleasing to me... I do enjoy your words my friend..and it is always a pleasure to read hat next comes from your pen. |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Sunnyone, thank you for your reply. An interesting take on Autumn... for me, it is a time of waking up to adventure, crisp air, school, and ironically, simply a feeling of life, but I guess the wonderful thing is that we're all individuals with many different takes on things from which to keep learning and considering... Ron, thank you, my friend, for your time in reading my works -- I know what you mean regarding having enough time to reply, but I am very happy to hear that you still make the time to read them and enjoy them. I consider it an honor, coming from one of my favorite poets. Thank you, Sir. -MVS "It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself." |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Mark, this feels heavy with the news of yesterday. Autumn is generally my most loved time of year, yes, it does feel like new beginnings, usually. This sad thing happening in the country, I just don't know how to cope with all of it. Write on, my friend. Sandra |
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