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Professor Gloom
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of Depression

0 posted 2001-09-10 06:19 AM


Drifting from my hand to floor,
My ink pen,
Has escaped my grasp once more,
Thought words in my hand won’t keep,
Fallen pen,
My body has gone to sleep,
Dancing thoughts inside my brain,
Fallen in,
Dreams flowing down sleeping drain
Then imaginary quill,
Filling in
But not a page would it fill,
Inkless pen.

Gloom


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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2001-09-10 06:56 AM


Drifting from my hand to floor,
Has escaped my grasp once more,
Thought words in my hand won’t keep,
My body has gone to sleep,
Dancing thoughts inside my brain,
Dreams flowing down sleeping drain
Then imaginary quill,
But not a page would it fill,


...you fill these pages with many thoughts..and my inkless mind with temptation at times...
oh just had to say it..

sorry, forgive  me... it was just my nakdthoughts unfolding this morn.


M

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



MyEnchanted_Melody
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since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
2 posted 2001-09-10 01:25 PM




Then imaginary quill,
Filling in
But not a page would it fill,
Inkless pen.

-------------------------

Your pen is certainly not inkless.....

I know how it feels that to be so at times....

You have expressed it sooo well.......and I enjoyed the read.

I'll add this to my library ...in case a friend might need to hear it.....

Thank you
************************


"Oh...me!Oh Life!
Of the questions of these recurring..........
Of myself forever reproaching myself,
for who more foolish than I......"
~Whitman~

Zinsser
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since 2001-02-27
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Calif.
3 posted 2001-09-10 01:30 PM


Like this.... mine is trying to quiet all the thoughts enough to pen them  LOl
Can't tell you how many  times I've written something with duplo building being built on my back  LOL
~Connie~

Gentle Spirit
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Posts 13989

4 posted 2001-09-10 01:36 PM


I have felt this all to often myself Gloom.  Your pen shall never run dry though, there is to much poetry in you.  Nice write.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

baerlon
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5 posted 2001-09-10 10:42 PM


I love the descriptive stye you use in this one, thx for the read.

There's a peace inside us all
Let it be your friend
It will help you carry on
In the end
There's a peace inside us all
-Creed

Professor Gloom
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of Depression
6 posted 2001-09-11 05:37 AM



Thank you, Nakdthoughts,
Always a pleasure to please you.

Thank you, Melody
No inkless pens, I lose them long before that,
Glad to add a page.

Thank you, Zinsser,
My thoughts are myriad and it’s hard to find the time
To place them on paper properly.

Thank you, Gentle Spirit
Yes, I have been called “Full of it” many times.
Pleased you liked my words.

Thank you, baerlon
The style form of this one in an inversion of my normal one.
Sometimes I need a few more words and little more time.

Gloom

Cpat Hair
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7 posted 2001-09-11 08:24 AM


nicely done Gloom... you certainly have filled my mind with thoughts from reading your words..and inkless..I doubt your pen ever inkless..


Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
8 posted 2001-09-17 11:16 AM



In light of the recent week, this penning was somehow a bit prophetic...or perhaps it is just now that I read it, and see it as such...

Professor Gloom
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Posts 3082
of Depression
9 posted 2001-09-17 12:34 PM


Thank you, Cpat Hair,
I’m glad to fill thoughts,
Yes I’ve but to sit and begin to write,
Always plenty of Gloom to write of.

Thank you, Sunshine,
Perhaps it was,
Since then I have not posted,
The pen is sort of inkless, but by choice.
Now there is enough Gloom about without my words.
Considering the nature of most my writing.
I shall attempt writings with touches of hope,
Glimmers in the dark.

Gloom

The Lady of Shallot
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since 2001-10-03
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10 posted 2001-10-13 01:20 PM


then we pick it up once more, or write from the veins in our souls!

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

The Lady of Shallot
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11 posted 2001-10-17 05:00 PM


for you



this is a fine poem!

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-
Anna

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