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Paula Finn
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0 posted 2001-09-10 03:03 AM


Morning has broken
in colours of red and gold
dew drenched grass beckons

tempting tired toes
to savour the cool damp earth
mud squished between them

Feel the wind tease
taste the changes as they come
capture the rainbow

[This message has been edited by Paula Finn (edited 09-10-2001).]

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ethome
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1 posted 2001-09-10 04:40 AM


I like the colors!  This is a beautiful Work....marvelous images....write on dear poet lady!!
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2 posted 2001-09-10 06:31 AM


how l luv tis colourful poem!
Alan
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3 posted 2001-09-10 08:16 AM


This is so pretty Paula. It brightened up my gray skies. Beautiful read.
alan

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4 posted 2001-09-10 09:48 AM


Feel the wind tease
taste the changes as they come
capture the rainbow

what a beautiful painted art of words....love it...especially the last stanza!

((hugs))
Charisma

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5 posted 2001-09-10 07:57 PM


wonderfully done Paula. . . I can hear the music now. . .  

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Sunnyone
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6 posted 2001-09-11 08:21 AM


My Twin, you are a true artist, capturing the colors of life in such enchanting ways!!

The road goes on forever, and the stories never end...
  
    


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