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Fiery One
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Fiery One |
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Topheth Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 297Texas 
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Fiery One Burning bright within the night, that glow’s begun behind my eyes; I’m hypnotized, nearly paralyzed by that fiery one. The strength of sun, charm of moon, grounded here upon this earth for all it’s worth, the gentle birth of rumble into boom! Like lightning flash, a raging storm which ravages those sleepy forms of boredom and stale ashes, that fiery one prods by shock what left alone would slowly rot by life’s incessant clock. Keep the spark, keep the flame, keep the hope that people name youth! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
This is a very very cool poem!!! Excellent cadence and rhyme...love the inner rhyme youve mixed in... Welcome to Poetry Land Topheth, I will watching for more of your superb writing. jm Well I looked to the sky for my anthem |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
very nice  I enjoyed the read |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Topheth~ Nicely penned. Welcome to Passions ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Yes, please do keep the hope and the spark of youth. It can sustain you throughout your life. And keep writing more goodies like this. Kacy |
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