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Titia Geertman
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0 posted 2001-09-09 06:29 PM




on september eight
in between the stormy rains
the sky was on fire


are there any words
to describe nature's beauty
in this sunset shown


disapearing fast
vanishing in world unknown
leaving dark behind



A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/


[This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (edited 09-09-2001).]

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Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2001-09-09 06:36 PM


Yes indeed it is beautiful.  Almost worthy of your lovely poetry.  Joyce
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2 posted 2001-09-09 06:48 PM


Titia~
Your words are like a special ink brushed across the sky just so~

Those photos are GORGEOUS !
Thank you for sharing them with us !
What beauty~
Love ya'
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Topheth
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3 posted 2001-09-09 10:34 PM


Gorgeous photos and words... thank you for posting this.
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4 posted 2001-09-09 10:44 PM


Titia, your words light the screen the same way the sun lights the horizon. This is a beautiful presentation....
Titia Geertman
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5 posted 2001-09-10 01:21 PM


Joyce, thanks, glad you enjoyed

Marge, it was such a beautiful sight, took over 40 pics (all on my webpage, created a special album), it's the season of colored skies, in a few weeks it will be all purple at sunset and on dec. 21 it will sink just in front of our house behind a little church.
Thanks for your lovely words

Topheth, thanks for reading

Balladeer, glad to see you enjoying this and thanks for the sweet words.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/

Alan
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6 posted 2001-09-10 09:26 PM


these are beautiful pictures...and the words match them perfectly...
alan

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7 posted 2001-09-11 01:52 AM


Wow Titia, those are fantastic pictures - you know I love my pictures!     You wrapped your words around that beauty and made it even more beautiful.

*~If you can't say anything nice about someone, don't say anything at all*~
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vlraynes
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8 posted 2001-09-11 05:56 AM



Titia-
   This is beautiful!
   The pictures are wonderful, and you've
   penned such lovely lines to accompany them.
   Enjoyed this very much!
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky



"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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9 posted 2001-09-11 06:00 AM


your words and the sunsets are amazing Titia....I am a great lover of these wonderful sunsets.

Thanks for sharing my friend

((hugs))
Charisma

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10 posted 2001-09-11 08:04 AM


ah... inspired by the sunset...and you do capture it well. Nicely done Titia!
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