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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2001-09-09 10:56 AM


Statistically Speaking

I don't wish to be a number
at least not of that kind
the letter  D  I would subtract
if only in my mind.

I never would have wanted
to be of partner-less.
That letter D gets on my nerves
puts me into distress.

Why can't the abc's let go
of letters that bring hurt.
Which ones would you want to forget,
which ones would you convert?

That D pretends to be a smile
in language spoken here.
But in my mind when it appears
it only causes fear.

It should have been expected
but it wasn't, Dumb of me.
I dislike that letter so,
that one right after C.

~Wynter..playing around ...for now

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



© Copyright 2001 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2001-09-09 10:59 AM


Wynter,
Interesting and good play on words, I like.

Topheth
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2 posted 2001-09-09 11:01 AM


I truly enjoyed.  And a big grin for these:

"That D pretends to be a smile
in language spoken here.
But in my mind when it appears
it only causes fear."

Charisma
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3 posted 2001-09-09 11:06 AM


I like your lovely thoughts very much...

Charisma

nakdthoughts
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4 posted 2001-09-09 11:18 AM


Sy...thank you,
that process of Ding
is not one bit fun...of course I am talking about Divorce but it may mean other things to other readers...

It's tough being in limbo..although I love doing the Limbo.
Now that L has some soft meanings..I would never remove the letter that comes after K.
Lovingly,
~Wynter/M...still messing around..a bit *s


T as long as your grin isn't made from
that  D      
thank you,
~Wynter


Charisma..have any letters you would like to  omit?  thank you dear
~smiling
Maureen


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II




[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 09-09-2001).]

GhostWriter_6
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5 posted 2001-09-09 12:01 PM


loved the play on words.. the concept you used was original.. and originality usually makes for the best poems....
Duncan
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6 posted 2001-09-09 03:57 PM


Hmmmm...but then I would be Uncan.  I think I'm going to have to keep just this one.  
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7 posted 2001-09-09 04:59 PM


Wynter~
Hmmmmmmmmm !
This is VERY interesting~
Layers of intrigue~
Hey ... just took notice ...
I might not have to rely on that letter either~

*LOL @ Uncan ! !
~*Marge*~

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Professor Gloom
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8 posted 2001-09-09 05:13 PM


VEry nicely done,
I always enjoy your words.

Gloom

Alan
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9 posted 2001-09-09 05:20 PM


I enjoyed your play on words. good read.
alan

Rex Allen McCoy
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10 posted 2001-09-09 07:43 PM


A little light hearted htinking never hurt anyone and it's fun to read

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
11 posted 2001-09-10 05:42 AM


GhostWriter_6

thank you..was  discussing something with someone and the idea crossed my mind how I hated the D word and never expected it to be in my vocabulary...thus the play on words. I appreciate your comments. *s
Duncan
You are too funny...gave me a laugh, I hadn't thought about what that would do to others names...Uncan..pretty neat though  
*s thank you for the visit.
~Wynter


Marge      
Haaaaaaaa you too, made me laugh...well don't rely on that letter if you don't have to *s thanks Marge...hugsssss

oh and yes  Uncan  gave me  a nice  smile too  

Professor Gloom
glad you could enjoy a taste of my humor ...thank you

~Wynter


Alan
Always a pleasure to be read, thank you *s


Rex
Good to see you..yes a little humor can never hurt especially if  directed at oneself. Thank you  *s

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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