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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-09-09 12:16 PM

Entering Passions Vault

today I read some gems
fit me rather well
for hours I am hypnotized
underneath your gold spun spell
they wear like word jewelry
I arrange them for me to see
word crafters and their wares
treasures sparkle all around me
cut and polished letters
smithed in precious line metal
fashioned here for every taste
in perfection do you only settle
pinned, clipped, and clasped
to the places of our hearts
each day to enter the passions vault
our treasures are your art

"...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare

[This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (edited 09-09-2001).]

Rex Allen McCoy
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since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

1 posted 2001-09-09 12:30 PM

And that is true ... words deeply steeped in artistic passion

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2001-09-09 04:18 AM

OneSlickLady~
That is just a PERFECT write for this joint ! !

Makes me feel like one of the Brinks crew
that just pulled off the perfect heist !

Cool write~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

3 posted 2001-09-09 09:08 AM

Beautiful write!

Charisma

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2001-09-09 09:10 AM

"word jewelry" love the term

very nice

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

5 posted 2001-09-09 09:28 AM

Lovely!

RSEvans
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since 1999-10-23

Posts 1147
Tulsa, OK, USA

6 posted 2001-09-09 09:29 AM

A GEM of your own, poetess....

GhostWriter_6
Member

since 2001-09-03

Posts 237
??Amityville??

7 posted 2001-09-09 11:30 AM

awesome poem

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2001-09-09 12:22 PM

LOVELY...LOVELY...LOVELY!

~Time has cast a spell on you
so you won't ever forget me~

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

9 posted 2001-09-09 01:58 PM

go back into those vaults. . . and you'll find some of the best poems. . .

great job helen. . .

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