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Doing Laundry |
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Topheth Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 297Texas 
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Doing Laundry Saturday afternoon, feeling all filthy, we twirled and spun getting quite drenched, then tumbled and rolled around in our heat. Afterwards, dried and beat, we folded neatly into each other. |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
This is cute. It made me smile. Welcome to Passions. I look forward to seeing more. alan |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh I really liked this! Hope to see more. WELCOME TO PASSIONS!! ~Time has cast a spell on you |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
A great little gem! Corinne |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
YES!!! great metaphor... well executed.... loved it! welcome to the blue pages....... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Welcome!  this is great! Please check your email for a special greeting! ~SEA"Deputy Moderator ~ Open Forum" |
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Masked Intruder
Moderator
Senior Member
since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets |
I really like your name. I thought I'd just pop in and tell you that. You can't wake a person who is pretending to be asleep. -- Navajo Proverb |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
These short, concise poems have a lot to say! Welcome to Passions! Karilea |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Welcome to Passions - Beware, though - You just might find yourself neglecting the laundry if you hang around here too much...  |
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Topheth Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 297Texas |
I find the hamper half-full these days and rare do I wash a full load. But that's okay. There's new clothing out there somewhere for me. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Welcome to passions, and I like your entrance....well done! Charisma |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Very clever little write...I love the premise...Welcome to Passions! sp  tried to write a letter |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
wonderful writing ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Doing the laundry uhhhh  Oh dear, I did mine the wrong way all along, thank you for letting me know  WELCOME Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Topheth Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 297Texas |
To all, thanks! And for Titia - ROTFL! |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
WHO TOOK MY SOAP POWDER!!! *S* Welcome to Passions. Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream. |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Thanks dear for your ROTFL, I see it a lot, but still don't know exactly what it means, I do know what LOL means though Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
gonna repost my laundry quandary pome just for you why? hell, who knows... lol  why not? |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
So that's what they're calling it these days. Great first post! |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
I like this a lot!! W*E*L*C*O*M*E* to passions!! *smiles* ~Tier |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
ROTFLOL--titia, this means rolling on the floor laughing out loud a belated welcome to passions!! i have a soft spot for short poems and this is clearly one of the best i have come across.... looking forward to reading more of your work |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
This is an awesome play on words. I give it two dryer sheets up!!! Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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