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Dark Angel
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0 posted 2001-09-08 09:58 PM



your white-petalled smile
grows wild daisies in my eyes
passion blooms within

© Copyright 2001 Dark Angel - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2001-09-08 10:35 PM


DarkAngel~
What a lovely idea in bloom~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Enchantress
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2 posted 2001-09-08 10:41 PM


Oh so sweet and lovely.  And daisies, especially wild ones are my favourite flower.  This I really enjoyed.  Nancy Lee.

~Time has cast a spell on you
  so you won't ever forget me~

Martie
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3 posted 2001-09-08 11:46 PM


Maree--I'm so glad to see you posting.  The prettiest flowers always grow in the heart. I see you know this.  Hugs!
Charisma
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4 posted 2001-09-09 10:45 AM


oh I love wild daisies....and this was a lovely description...like your thoughts  

Charisma

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with you
5 posted 2001-09-09 10:54 AM


ahhha, white daises and purple tulips are my ultimate favorites...
and wild daises are even better  
this is beautiful  

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2001-09-09 10:57 AM


Dark Angel,
Simple and direct, enjoyed

Alwye
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In the space between moments
7 posted 2001-09-09 09:33 PM


Fantastic imagery, my friend.  Simply lovely words you pen.  

*Krista Knutson*

"Touched the mirror, broke the surface of the water,
Saw my true self, all illusions shattered..." ~Tracy Chapman

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8 posted 2001-09-09 11:03 PM



I love this!  What a great thought!  You penned a gorgeous senryu  

Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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9 posted 2001-09-09 11:14 PM


Your spirit shines in this, maree...
and I still wish to see things through your eyes...

Chelsea~
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10 posted 2001-09-09 11:41 PM


dark angel:

A wonderful image!  

Saunni
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11 posted 2001-09-10 02:02 AM


Dark Angel, very lovely!  

Sauni @~~~>~~

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Not On Us, But In Us
The River Flows Not Past,
But Through Us

JamesMichael
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12 posted 2001-09-10 02:07 AM


Like this...James
citizenx
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13 posted 2001-09-10 03:20 PM


passion blooms within

Have to agree with this and what everyone else said. Enjoyed this.

"The writer who refuses to explore the darker regions of the heart will never be able to write convincingly of the wonder, magic or joy of love" nick

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just out of reach
14 posted 2001-09-10 03:23 PM


Bravo!!   Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Jamie
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15 posted 2001-09-10 03:39 PM


Love this dear... wonderful wonderful...


furlong
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16 posted 2001-09-10 06:08 PM


High coo

Confucius say: “don’t
hide your light under a bush
el se we won’t see it.”



shadow974
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17 posted 2001-09-10 06:23 PM


Wonderfully done great thought great image.

Throw your heart out in front of you
And run out to catch it.
ARAB PROVERB

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18 posted 2001-09-10 07:08 PM


now this was worth waiting for. . .

wonderfully done my friend. . . you know, we miss you around here. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

baerlon
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19 posted 2001-09-10 10:39 PM


:-)

There's a peace inside us all
Let it be your friend
It will help you carry on
In the end
There's a peace inside us all
-Creed

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